Young Writers Society

I hope this is okay MJ. Like the PArtials get to practice in a gym every now and again. So they can rally there. If not I'll get rid of this.

David~~

That night I spent in a hazy half sleep, and whenever I did get to sleep, I woke up right away. Finally though, the drugs wore off, and I was dragged to the gym.

"Hey, can you loosen your grip a bit," I asked them. But all they did was tighten it.


They pushed me into the large dome after a bit, and I found the other partials there.

"Hey," I called to them, then found my way to the tank. Hoping in, I let my self sprout the gills, and fins, my other half had. my legs slowly fused together, and my arms vanishes. My skin tone slowly turned green, and soon I was a full eel, but with a brain.

"Hello," I called to the shark in the tank over, in a snake like hiss.

"Hi" she said, a bit tentatively, in a rough deep voice.

"So, whats salt water like," I asked, as I threw myself out of the water, and back in.

"Salty," Camryn answered me.

"Cool," I said, "fresh tastes like bottled water, but a bit dither"

"I could guess," She said. then she climbed out, her body slowly turning normal.

I followed that trend, but kept my teeth pointed.

"so whats it like being a Shark?" I asked her. This was the first time we had really talked, and still wasn't.

"Okay," She said.

"Okay, s-" She cut me off.

"okay, listen David, right? whatever. I don't care about talking to you right now, okay?"

"Kay, but I was thinking you would like to escape."

"What do you mean?"

"I mean, your a fish, I'm a fish. The only difference is, I'm the only one here able to get through that fence without pain, and I can get others out too. But I need your help to do it, because when I'm in eel, I won't be able to carry that many people, so you in?"

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After that Red can come in to the group.

Camryn:

Hmm. So he'd considered it, too. Maybe the guy actually had a brain.

I paused for a moment, eying him cautiously. "Yeah, I'm in."

"Good. So, who else do you think'll go?" he asked, looking around the room.

"Red will do it- no doubt. She's dying to leave."

"You're probably right about that. Wanna ask her?" he asked me.

"Sure- we'll talk to her whenever they let her out and bring her over here," I said, a bit of regret in my voice. I didn't like the other partials getting tranquilized so much. I knew it wasn't a pleasant thing.

"We'll need a good plan," I told him. "A really good one."

"We sure will. Like I said, I can't carry many people. Think you could handle at least... uh, three?"

I thought about it. I was pretty strong, considering my father had worked me out at the gym nearly every day of my life since I was five years old. "Definitely, probably more."

David~~

"Good, and a bunch of the other partials can go a lot smaller, I might be able to carry them, and some can fly, so they are good too. So we just need a land luberto help us, fend off the fuzz while I get rid of the fence," I said, and at that moment Red walked in.

Cam nodded, and motioned for me to go first, her right behind.

"Hey Red," I said.

"What?" She asked.

"I...I mean we," I said motioning to Cam, "Need your help."

"With?" She asked again.

"with getting out of here. Now you know that I hate it here, like most. That's why I always am trying to escape. But now, I realized that I can't be going alone, or be selfish. So I need your help. Me and Cam are teaming up to get people out. But we need some land animals to help us out, help us fight. You are strong, plus you want to get almost as much as me, most likely. So Will you help us?" I asked.

"Depends...whats your plan," Red said firmly.

"we don't have one, per say...yet. But here is a basic idea of how it might go. I escape my cell, that's easy for me, I can go eel, slid out, then go back to normal, shock some guards, free the others. Then, while I get rid of the fence, so every one can get out, I will need some cover, animals are harder to him, and better fighters, and Cam can't really fight as a shark. after that, we jumped, Cam drags everyone, well most, I'll try to carry some off, and some can swim if its not to big a current. Then we run for it." I explained.

John

I ran around the gym going as fast as I could 100mph it was faster that a cheetah but then that was kind of the point. I started to hear conversation of rallies as I ran past the water tanks. I slowed down and then stopped. Red, Cameron and David were standing talking of escaping.

"hey" I said coming and starting to listen to the conversation.

"yeah what?" Cam said.

"what nothing hey I want to escape too and I don't exactly feel good about almost Houdini planning it" I said looking at David.

"at least I try to escape" He said back in a mocking tone.

"yeah try, the difference is if I tried to escape as many time as you have I would of done it I mean you just try out running them" I said I probably wouldn't have escaped if I tried as many times as he had but I needed something and I wasn't about to sink to Fish boy.

"hey you would try to outrun them too" David said and the girls looked a little board of are bickering.

"yeah cause I'm like super fast it's what I do I mean you get stuck on the fence I could scale it in 2 seconds flat, easy" I said that much was true my speed combined with my agility made me a very good climber I mean it wasn't just running I was fast at I could translate my speed through to almost anything physical.

"yeah and I can get out of my cell you can't can you, can you" David said becoming more patronising by the word.

"no but-" Red interrupted me.

"look you can climb, you can get out of cells, John he's better and escaping than you are deal with it, David you always try to outrun them It's true deal with it now can both of you shut up so we can actually plan something" Red said she was kinda good at calming down situation but I still couldn't help letting out a little growl that I got a hiss back from. In truth I'd never really got to talk to David as a person but he seemed an alright guy and I made a mental note to be nicer to him in the future.

"okay same time tomorrow and we'll past notes in the cells as long as mine don't get soaked" Cam said and I walked off joining he Que so we could get reexamined by a bunch of annoying nurses. Except Jesse I couldn't help but have a crush on her not that I would ever act on it she was way to 'normal'. I walked up to the Que and ended up behind Danny.

" saw you bad mouthing the doctor again" She said stroking back her hair.

"saw or heard Danny" I said knowing she liked to sit back in her cell.

"maybe both maybe neither maybe I just guessed that you had been doing it again" Danny said smiling as she was patted down by one of the guards.

"that would make you a very good guesser" I said as the guard moved on to me once we were both past that point she spoke to me again.

"I hate that guard he's such a pedo every time he Pat's me down he makes sure he gives my arse a little squeeze it's disgusting" Danny said taking off her shoes to be exaraided.

"ah he has a crush on you, a very sick crush but still a crush" I said and she laughed a little and I shook some unpleasant thoughts away.

"what?" Danny asked as we stepped into the separate decontamination showers they sure were thorougher i thought for probably the hundredth time.

"well I just thought what a mid forties guy could want with a hot mutant animal hybrid it's not pretty" Danny blushed and I realised what I had let slip by accident.

"you think I'm hot" Danny said.

"well I don't know maybe your really ugly after all the amount of girls I've seen has been kinda limted" I said covering for my self.

"sure" Danny said as the guards led up to are cells.

*hope all the dialouge I used was okay Cause I know I used a lot of it and sorry it's so lond I should of probably split it into to two*.

Jok two things.

One, how would John know right away what they were talking about, when he wasn't even there. Try making it more realistic, so it makes sense how he would know.

And two, the fence is electrified, so even your guy is a good climber, he would not be able to touch it with out being knocked out, or dying, and David would have been quick to point that out.

MJ, let's just pretend our posts are morphed together.
Anyways, it seems we have moved on from there, our little charade ended.

Jesse

She laid in her room, the white lab coat hanging on a peg by the door. Her quarters were small, only enough room for a small bed, and a desk with an out dated computer on top. Crammed into the corner was a large dog bed, which at the moment was taken up by Pi as she lay there, intently watching Jesse's every move.

Jesse had changed her shirt, the old wrecked and blood caked one wouldn't suit well. She laid there on her bed, looking intently on the white ceiling and felt herself whimper. She already had an injury in her leg, which was throughly bandged, and just recently she had gotten a larger scrape across her chest. It was incredibly hard to bandage that by herself, but she had too much modesty to ask for help. The bandages were messy and roughly wrapped, already showing signs of wear.

She wiggled her toes gently, and stretched back up to her normal position, feeling the stinging feeling on her chest. Pisces started to whine slightly, and Jesse could help but smile. Taking the blue and green ball off the shelf, one of the only objects of colour by the way, and headed for the door, automatically Pisces jumping to her feet.

"We are going outside." Jesse smiled at Pi's eagerness. "Behave yourself in the hall remember." She muttered, grabbing her colourful converse and quickly putting them on. Soon he pushed the button and the door slid open, the giant dog racing out the door.

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~Incognito

Don't bite my head off.

one I thought it was only the fence in the water that was electrified and two they were all in the gym my guy was running around and cheetah good hearing as would any other person in their probably cause animals usually have really good hearing. which is why he came over.

that makes sence right and no offence but its about half mutant hybrids how realistic can it be. *no offence*

Okay, but can you still change the electric fence thing.

And The reason it did not make much sense was because they were all away from the main thing, and whispering, so it seems weird for you guy just to know right away. Cause you can't just give your characters info they were never given.

I was just pointing these out, not biting your head off. Just asking for you to make it so it went with what was going on, I'm sorry for trying to make things make sense.

Charlotte

I stood in the gym, away from the others. My hip still burned from the shot I received earlier. I took in a deep breath and allowed feathers to bloom from my arms. We were in the gym, so I might as well enjoy myself.

My body shrank and my arms were obscured with feathers. My bone density changed within me and my scrawny legs got thinner. I looked at my talons. My sight was a lot keener.

I felt a little guilt about lashing out on Jesse, but not enough for me todo anything foolish, like appologize. I mean, she wasn't exactly the one who got us into this mess, but she was one of them and I didn't trust her. I think there is more to her than she lets on.

I kicked off from the ground and soared over the heads of others. A few pointed up at me, but I was used to it. This was the only thing I had. Grace. Nobody here really payed attention to me. I was just the quiet girl in the corner. No. I'm going to be the quiet girl who escaped.

I touched back down. I can't stay up in the air for too long. About five minutes. My body's too heavy to stay up as long as most birds. That's what seperated me from the others. They're so in touch with their animal side. I can't. I sighed and walked back to my corner, watching a small group talk animatedly.

Even without my highly sensitive ears, it was easy to see they were forming a plan. I could help them. No, I thought. I need to stick to myself. If I get attached to others it would only cause problems. i turned away and changed back into the vunerable human girl that I really was.

Whitney

I prowled a corner of the gym. I was in my animal form. It felt better than my human form, instincutal.

"Mutiny." I heard my twin, Josh.

"What?" I asked him. I wasn't sure what he meant.

"They're talking about mutiny, escape." Josh explained.

"What will you do?" I asked him, only partially unsure of what he would decide.

"I'm not sure. What will you do?" he redirected his question.

"I won't leave you." I insisted.

I changed back to human form to talk to my brother face to face.

"Who." I asked. I knew he would understand, and I didn't want the guards to expect.

"Red, Cam, David, and John I think." he explained. "And probably some others."

I ran my hand through my short white hair. "We'll have to decide soon."

I watched the four Josh had mentioned talking by the tank. Mutiny. Escape. I would have to decide.

Wait, I'm confused. Ugh, okay Jok, I know you were already like asked a few questions, but what's up with the shower thing? I don't get where or why there doing it. Not that it's a bad idea, just give me more info so's I can make a post on it...please?

Jesse

She ambled towards the door when she was stopped by a guard who barred her way. He looked at her warily.

"Where are you going?" He asked, monotonously. He looked at her and the huge dog suspiciously, obviously contemplating if she was a Partial or not.

"I am going outside. It's pretty obvious." Jesse said with a slight eye roll. She hated the new guys that always showed up every week, not knowing who exactly she was. Pisces whined lightly, shaking with anticipation to jump away through the gate and run under the bright sun which they could see tantilizingly through the windows.

"I don't know who let you out, but get back to your cell Partial." he said, eyes falling on her bizarrly coloured hair. He ended up pointing the gun at her. "I don't want a fuss."

"I am not a Partial! My name is Dr. Berkeley!" She snapped, her anger eminating off of her, Pisces picking up the energies and growled lightly. Pisces walked up in front of her, obviously trying to protect her. Jesse touched Pisces collar lightly, trying to settle her, not wishing for a fight.

"It says on the list that there is no Doctor by that name."

"I came here a month ago. You must have been issued the wrong list. Trust me, I am a doctor, more over an intern." This was getting annoying.

"Where is you identification?" He wouldn't take his eyes off the dog who was viciously growling at him. "I supose you left it in your room, coincidentally. if you are so unwilling to go to your cell, at least go to the gym. If not, I will get another guard to take you there."

"No! I am a doctor!" Jesse called. The man said something into his radio and soon enough, two guards came towards her taking her by the arms, obviously not recognizing her. Jesse couldn't help but swear as they dragged her away despite her protests. They rounded a corner and shoved her through a secured doorway, obviously the door to the gym. The Partials were in there. No protection from any guards. She could be killed at this moment. She tried once more to break free but failed against their strong arms. They pushed her sprawling onto the track and she watched bewildered as they kicked the dog in their too.

She couldn't help mutter a curse. Maybe she would be unnoticed, or a scientist might recognize her. But as she turned to look at the rest of the gym, she sucked in a breath.

She was screwed.

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~Incognito

wow sarcasm, now I'm scared. Bolt
Okay In the moonlight I meant the showers and stuff you had to go through them to get from the gym to the cells cause the scientist are all parinoid or something. I'll fix the electric thing Bolt.
sorry next time I'll be more realistic.

John

I sat back down in my cell and while being puched by David stopped in front of my cell.

"I've got something to show you" He said before shocking the guard and swiping the guards card on the door letting me out. We both ran down the hallway a guard came and I ran ahead easily and put the speed into my punch and hit him with an uppercut before quickly snatching his tazer and shooting the guard. he fizzed for a second before lying lifelessly on the floor.

"I could of done that more easily" David said as we got closer too the door we took down three more guards before we running across the empty lot I increased my speed and ran at the fence but as I jumped up it shocked me and I was knocked backwards. I hazily got up and David smiled before he was hit with a tranquilizzer.

"can,t I have one of those" I said pointing at the needles in David as they got out their Tazers the one I had hit smiled as he shocked me I was hazy as they dragged us back through the hallway. we got cheers as always and a dog ran up and licked my face.

"bad dog" I heard Jesses voice say from a distantce.

"take them into my office I'll check on them as always, give John a little sedetive his brething pattern suggest he's not compleatly out of it" Her voice said speaking to a guard I felt a pinch in my arm and then I blacked out.

? ?

Charlotte

I noticed when Jesse entered the room. Almost everyone did. I looked around. No guards were near us. I didn't want to hurt her, normally I wasn't so brutal, but I could use this opertunity.

"Bad dog," she said, as he liked John's face. Then, out of no where he was tranqulized. Jesse said something about taking them to her office.

"What are you going to do with them there," I asked. She looked at me warily and at her chest. I could tell she wasn't trying to make me upset, but she also wasn't giving anything away.

"Only to help your freind," she replied calmly.

"Help?" I asked sarcastically. "You can't help us. You'll only help in killing us." I heard a murmur in agreement behind me.

"This is a doctor," one of the guards siad, poking me with his gun. "Go back to your activities or I'll take you to your cell."

"More threats?" I asked my hands growing into talons. "You stand up for this type of behavior, Jesse?" She eyed my talons but stood her ground.

"I am only trying to help," she said.

"Help. That's your excuse for treating us this way. You can help us by setting us free. I thought you were a kinder person than that."

"That's enough," a guard roared, tazering me. I fell to the ground, after being tazered again, before I fell into unconsciousness.