Young Writers Society

**Okay, I am officially confused. Go to the Discussion and Jok, we would like you to explain... I thought we were in the gym?

~Incognito

Well I wasn't trying to sound mean, its hard to display emotion when your typing. If i had said that, and you heard it, I would have sound calm and more like I was asking you. "Sorry about that, maybe I should put my dialogue in quotes and describe it" Says sort of jokingly, but also as a suggestion.

I think we should just continue from whitetiger's post.

*Um, okay, I'm just gonna jump in*

[Rello Firan - scientist]

His fingers circled around the black cup, warmth from the cappucino sinking into his bones. Rello swivled around a corner and hummed to himself with closed eyes and a content grin.

"That's enough!" A man's voice shouted.

His eyes shot open and, glancing around to where he was, stepped into the gym doors. A new intern was standing near the middle of the floors with a guard, tazer in hand and twitching mustache.

"Hello!" I called out, waving, "Mr. Guard! I think you have a friend of mine there," I pointed towards Jesse and motioned her over with my hand.

ah sorry I said that people started to line up to go out but you can say we all got sent back their or something that makes sence

I'm just continuing in the gym. Let me know if there's a problem with that.

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Camryn:

I walked into the gym, searching for a familiar face. I saw no sign of David or that other boy, whose name I couldn't recall. I spotted Red at the back of the gym, sitting alone. We made eye contact, and I began to walk towards her.

As I made my way through the room, I saw the white tiger twins eying me cautiously. I wondered what that was all about but kept going.

"Hey, Red," I said, sitting next to the girl.

"Hi, Cam," she responded.

"So... Wonder where the guys are. Probably being stupid and getting themselves tranquilized," I grimaced.

"Yeah, probably," she smiled slightly.

"So, what's your story, Red?"

She looked at me, puzzled.

"You know... Where you came from, what your home life was like, all that jazz."

Jesse

The doors slid open quickly and Jesse burst out, Pisces taking the chance to run out, but as soon as Pi caugth sight of Rello, she leapt onto him and wagged her tail quickly, licking his face covering it with unpleasant slober. (OCC: They are standing still. Pisces is just that big. ) Jesse had to take that chance to ridicule the guard.

"Tell your friend next time, that he was wrong. He should have the proper list, and I could get him kicked out for it. Unforunately, I am not truly a Partial." She stepped towards Rello who was holding a cup of coffee tightly, Pisces had stopped her barrage of love. He didn't even take the time to wipe the dog slober off his face.

"Oh dear, he believed you were a Partial eh?"

"Yes he did." Jesse enouciated the words slowly obviously resenting the guard. She couldn't help want to get back at him, maybe set a Partial on him, maybe make him believe that Pisces was one and make him chase her all around the small island. None of those seemed really good at the moment, so she decided that she was going to wait until later, give the scheming more time. "What brings you to this hall?"

"I do not quite remember." Rello looked around him, an eyebrow raised as if he was taking in his surroundings for the first time. Rello was, shall we say, different. Jesse didn't know what it was about him, but something about him made her slightly alarmed. He always seemed to be incredibly happy, sometimes even insane. "I think I was in search of something, but what exactly is unknown. Maybe that is what I am searching for! I am searching for the answer to what I was searching for before which could even possibly be what I was searching for even before then."

Jesse looked at him bewildered. but just shook her head slightly and gripped the blue and green ball in her hand. "I am going outside with Pi, would you like to come?"

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Heh, did I get Rello right? I think I may have made him a bit too... different. And I decided, Pisces really likes Rello, so be prepared to be bombarded by a gigantic dog.

~Incognito

I was only out for a few seconds. Just long enough for the guards to have dragged me over to a corner and Jesse to have left. Great, just fantastic.

I stirred and someone extended their hand, helping me to my feet. I glanced up to see a pretty girl, smiling a little.

"I'm Whitney," she said. "I saw you take the heat over there and I know you're probably not in the best condition."

"I'm Charlotte," I said. She was one of the twins. A white tiger. The color of her hair showed it. She seemed alright. "I'm fine. I just wish those guards couldn't say the same. I have had it with them."

"Just take it easy. Ignore them and try not to lose your temper. I know how it can be. Everyone does. We'll just have to perservere," she smilied, sadly.

"Not if I can find a way to escape," I said, hinting.

"That's not possible and even if it was I wouldn't leave my brother."

"I know, but my plan can work. I need about three people for it to work," I whispered.

"Tell me," she said, even though I knew she wasn't all the way on board with the idea.

I took a deep breath and stopped, someone was approaching us.

Whitney

Charlotte seemed okay, which was good. Those guards were pretty brutal with us. And weren't we supposed to be 'delicate experiments'?

Charlotte had a pan to escape, and needed three people. I wasn't completely on board but it was an interesing idea. And if it was a good one then maybe Josh would want to leave too.

"What's this idea?" I asked.

She opened her mouth as if to say something, but stopped suddenly. I looked to the side, someone was approaching us.

"Tell me later." I said softly.

I turned to the partial who had approached us. "Hello." I greeted kindly.

Charlotte

It was one of the guards. Whitney and I tried to look casual but that only made me look more suspicious. Whitney was a better actress than I

"What's going on over here?" the guard asked.

"What? Are we not allowed to associate or make freinds?" I asked sarcastically.

"Watch your tounge," he said, spitting at my feet. "I would hate to see something happen to a pretty little girl like you, but I do what he must." He smiled and I tried not to gag as his foul breath overwhelmed me.

When he walked away I turned back to Whitney.

"They must be getting suspicious. They're going around everywhere," I said, pointing to where the guards were breaking up groups.

"We'll talk more later, just tell me the outline of your plan. I'll run it through with my brother and perfect it, if we can," she said, excitment in her voice. This was good. She was interested.

"I can fly, which means that the guards can't reach me with their tazers or needles," I said. "I can distract half while I'm flying and you or your brother can distract the other half, somehow. Not something crazy, just...faint or something. Then the other can take down the defenses. You'll give a signal and we'll break for it. That's just a rough outline. Think about it." I smiled at her thoughtful look and walked away. There was a lot more planning to do.

Nico-White Cat

I awoke from my slumber of god knows how long. Whoever last hit me with a tranquilier sure used a heavy one. I was in the gym, surrounded by all the other partials talking and scheming their way out. Incompetant fools, didn't they realise they were wasting their time? Not that we had much else to do.
I spied two girls talking in a corner-one of them was the tiger twins. Normaly, I keep to myself, but I was feeling sassy. My electric blue hair stood on end as I walked past some fierce looking partials.

"Hello." Said the tiger twin kindly.
"Hi, I'm Nico."I eyed them curiously. They seemed ok to me.
"I'm Whitney!"said the tiger twin. The name suited her somehow.
"I'm Charlotte!"said the other girl. I wondered what they had been previously discussing before I had come over, as they both looked uneasy.
"So, what's the story? What's going on around here? I've been out for a couple of days-Guards got me good." I sighed. I hated the guards.
"Nothing, I haven't heard of anything anyway," said Charlotte. Lies; I could see it in her eyes. They didn't want me to know, obviously thinking a cat can't help them. I couldn't blame them though, they hadn't seen me in action. Wait until they do, then they'll be sorry they didn't tell me.
"Oh, Ok. That's disappointing, I would have thought somebody in this place would have made attempts at escaping, or even hatching a plan- but I guess I was wrong...Disappointing..." I thought to myself for a moment, and I could see the impatience in their eyes-they wanted me to leave.
"Well, I have to go run some laps, my legs are killing me. You know, being asleep for a few days really gives you cramps," I laughed feebly, I was used to feeling unwanted, but I never wanted to be wanted anyway, "So I guess I'll see you guys around!"
As I walked off, a partial approached me...


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Hope that's ok!:D
Kelly xXx

Whitney

I walked back to my brother and contemplated the plan. He looked as if he wanted me to transform mentally so we could talk, but I wasn't ready for explaining it yet. The plan was good, but it needed something. There was no way we could get out if the fences were still electrified.

Suddenly, I had an idea.

I walked over to a guard standing by a door.

"Excuse me sir." I said.

"What?" he spat. I could tell he hated the partials, and was slightly afraid of us.

"I don't feel so well, could I please be taken to see Doctor Jesse?" I asked. I felt fine, but I was an excellent actress.

He looked me over. "You look fine." he said.

"B-but." I stammered, practicing looking faint. "I-I feel f-f-" I fell to the floor.

I hoped Josh wasn't looking, he would be worried.

The guard picked me up akwardly and carried me out of the room. I glanced back and Josh was looking after me, worry in his eyes.

The guard laid me on a table in Jesse's office.

"What happened!?" she yelled when the guard dropped me onto the table. "Have the guards been pushing the partials around again!"

"No, no!" he said defensively. "She just fainted on me!"

Jesse shook her head. "Get out of my office."

The guard left and Jesse turned her attention to me. "What's wrong hun'?"

I sat up. "Nothing, but we're going to need your help."

I hoped the rumors were true that Jesse prefered the partials over the scientists.

Okay, so I'll post has me and John left the gym to escape.

David~~

After the little escape with John I hopped he would now get with the program and follow my escape, but for now I would just wait for my shot.

"Up," Barked a guard, and he dragged me to get my shot.

"Hey Jesse," I called when I arrived.

"Back again are we," Said a voice, but it wasn't Jesse, it was Barrick.

"Why are you here, Julius?" I asked, "Jesse is my normal knock out person"

"It's Dr. Barrik to you," He said slightly annoyed, "And Jesse is off at the moment, so I am giving this to you."

"Okay, Julius, but are you sure your up to it?"

"Just be quiet, and take the shot."

"Fine."

I held out my hand, he went forward to give me the shot, but then I moved it before he could.

"Stay still," He said, and went for the straps, but I shocked him when he tried.

"Sloppy, sloppy, sloppy. I thought you were smart enough to remember to wear your gloves," I said and sighed.

Quickly he slipped his rubber gloves on, obviously annoyed, and went over again. But when he tried again, he got another shock.

"That's it" He said, very angry, then lashed out and hit me, "Now stay still."

Oi vey, this got big fast.
I'm sorry, I can't keep up - I'm resigning. Someone can have my character, though I haven't posted yet so it's really no big deal.
Sorry!

Charlotte

What was Whitney doing? I hoped she was okay. I stopped. We were only in this to escape. I couldn't grow close to another partial. It would only cause trouble and heartbreak. That I was sure of. I saw her brother across the room. I decided to see what he knew.

"Hey," I said. "I'm Charlotte, a...friend of Whitney's." Josh nodded and continued to look at the door as if Whitney would appear any moment.

"She's fine," I said. His eyes flared.

"And how would you know that?" he growled. I sighed.

"Calm down. I was just talking with her. She'll tell you later. She knows what she's doing. She fainted on purpose," I smiled, trying to reassure him. He seemed relieved for a second, then narrowed his eyes.

"How can I trust you?"

"I could ask the same to you, my friend but that would only put us in an endless circle of questions. Just talk to Whitney later and if it's worth anything I trust you both," I said, though I hardly knew them. They both just had this vibe that no matter how much you wanted to hate them, it just wasn't possible.

"I'll talk to her," he said. I smiled and walked away. Josh seemed really nice. He was really suspicious, but who wasn't. Anyone of us could turn on our own kind. No one wanted to associate with a traitor. That only meant bad news.