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Antigone Cadmus · 2008-12-31T14:03:03Z

Hey! I recently became an instructor. What do instructors do best? Review! I will review... Any genre. Seriously. On Poetry and Art I will very hesitantly review poetry. I am not a poet. I will definitely review art. Keep in mind a detest modern pieces. On Fanfics Let me say this outright. I loathe Twilight. Therefore, I do not really want to review Twilight fanfics. I will review them if the involve killing Bella. Other Rules I will not review if the piece is more than 3 and a half Microsoft Word Pages. If you would like me to critique a long piece, post it in parts. If you hand me 80 pages to review, I will only review about 5. EDIT: If giving me a chapter from the middle of your story, (example: asking me to review Chapter 3) could you please give me a quick summary so I know what's going on? How to Post Tell me title. Tell me the genre. Brief summary is appreciated! Link If it is a Fan Fiction piece, tell me what it is based off of. Example: Title: Peter Pantaloon and the Rouge Marshmallow Genre: Fantasy Brief Summary: Peter Pantaloon is out shopping for a purple sheep. He hears a tale of the ancient Rouge Marshmallow, a giver of immortality. He goes off on a quest. Link: youngwriterssociety.com/blahblah Fanfic Example: Title: Super Twilight Fanfic Genre: Fan Fiction Brief summary: Edward's skin stopped sparkling! Oh no! What will the Cullen's ever do? Link: youngwriterssociety/meep Send me links, people! Edit: PLEASE NO MULTIPLE CHAPTER REQUESTS. After receiving requests of up to six reviews at once from one user, I have decided that multiple critiques will not be offered. If I review one of your chapters and you want a review of the others, feel free to post them ONE AT A TIME in my thread. I will stop taking all multiple requests after Asxz's post on MARCH 1, 2009! Thanks!

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Wed Jul 15, 2009 7:50 pm

Twit says... · Wed Jul 15, 2009 7:50 pm

Title: The Mad Psychiatrist
Genre: Other Poetry
Link: topic50841.html

I know you said "very hesitantly", but I have no doubt you'll find plenty wrong with it. ^_^

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Mon Aug 31, 2009 2:43 pm

Antigone Cadmus says... · Mon Aug 31, 2009 2:43 pm

*revived*

Odi et amo. quare id faciam, fortasse requiris?
nescio, sed fieri sentio et excrucior.
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Mon Aug 31, 2009 6:15 pm

Pretty Crazy says... · Mon Aug 31, 2009 6:15 pm

Please do this:
Mission Zero part 3 action/adventure fiction
topic52445.html#p594815
I don't think it's too long. Also there is two previous parts that you may need to read to understand this one. If you have any problems with this just let me know.
Thanks!

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Sat Sep 12, 2009 6:53 pm

Lord Anzius says... · Sat Sep 12, 2009 6:53 pm

Hiya! Haven't seen you in a while. =)

I have this one piece I need (want) you to review... Please.

Name:And There Was Drum Roll.
Genre: Fantasy
brief: It's about a man called Brian who was a captain of the imperial army until he saw something he didn't want to see, then he committed treachery and is in this (the first chapter) chapter being executed. It is also abut some of the struggles that take place in the imperial family and the history of demons and the Emperor (whose name is Anzius)

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/post548273.html#p548273

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Mon Sep 14, 2009 11:05 am

Xirenia says... · Mon Sep 14, 2009 11:05 am

Hey there =]

I would very much appreciate it if you would review the first chapter of a book I'm writing. If you have no time then don't worry about it, but if you have I moment to spare I'd really be grateful.

Name: How to live - Chapter 1

Genre: Romantic fiction

Brief: Well, it's the first chapter, so you don't really need to know much.

Link: topic52281.html

Thank you :smt003

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Thu Oct 22, 2009 8:18 pm

Antigone Cadmus says... · Thu Oct 22, 2009 8:18 pm

So I kinda died for awhile and was gone from YWS. *hangs head in shame*
butbutbut this is REALLY revived now. I will review all of you as soon as possible.

Odi et amo. quare id faciam, fortasse requiris?
nescio, sed fieri sentio et excrucior.
-Catullus, Carmen 85

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Mon Jun 12, 2023 11:36 am

DreamyAlice says... · Mon Jun 12, 2023 11:36 am

Hello, I am one of the res crew mods here on YWS. This is a message just to inform you that I will lock and archive this thread as it is not active anymore. We have to archive and lock the inactive threads to keep the forum organized so no worries if you'd like to reopen it at any point in the future please contact a current resources moderator, we would be happy to reopen it for you ^-^

-ALICE

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