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Title: The Mad Psychiatrist
Genre: Other Poetry
Link: topic50841.html

I know you said "very hesitantly", but I have no doubt you'll find plenty wrong with it. ^_^

*revived*

Please do this:
Mission Zero part 3 action/adventure fiction
topic52445.html#p594815
I don't think it's too long. Also there is two previous parts that you may need to read to understand this one. If you have any problems with this just let me know.
Thanks!

Hiya! Haven't seen you in a while. =)

I have this one piece I need (want) you to review... Please.
Name:And There Was Drum Roll.
Genre: Fantasy
brief: It's about a man called Brian who was a captain of the imperial army until he saw something he didn't want to see, then he committed treachery and is in this (the first chapter) chapter being executed. It is also abut some of the struggles that take place in the imperial family and the history of demons and the Emperor (whose name is Anzius)

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/post548273.html#p548273

Hey there =]

I would very much appreciate it if you would review the first chapter of a book I'm writing. If you have no time then don't worry about it, but if you have I moment to spare I'd really be grateful.

Name: How to live - Chapter 1

Genre: Romantic fiction

Brief: Well, it's the first chapter, so you don't really need to know much.

Link: topic52281.html

Thank you

So I kinda died for awhile and was gone from YWS. *hangs head in shame*
butbutbut this is REALLY revived now. I will review all of you as soon as possible.

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