Antigone's Critique Shop

Tell me title: The Bedside Reminder
Tell me the genre: Romantic Fiction sort of
Summary: not much to tell. but its short
Link: http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/post513388.html?highlight=#513388

Done!

More?

Link: Steps Ahead of Thunder

Genre: Other fiction/Horror

Summary:

Well, it's supposed to be an entry for Cat and June's Horror contest. I'd rather not give you a summary, and instead make sure you can tell what's going on without me spelling it out for you? If you'd rather a summary, though, just PM me.

I'd love help on how to possibly make it more horrific, and of course how to improve it all-around. Although, I'm not sure if you're okay with Horror? I don't think it's really that terrifying, but it's supposed to be a little scary. If you'd rather not review it, just PM me. ^_^

Thanks so much, Sakura!

Completed.

Who's next?

'Tis me!

Romantic
Clues *Edited*
topic45718.html

Shred please. ^_^

Shredded.

Next?

Uh me! ME!

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic45764.html

the Mansion ch 8 part 1

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic45863.html

I would like you to review that please!
Summary; I can't give you a summary. it is only my lead for a story.
It is fiction. Please review it! No one else is!

Done with both!

Step right up!

*Steps up*

I'd love it if you were to comment on The Gate in fantasy fiction. Please ignore the dialogue grammar; I meant it to be that way. I'd rather have stuff on character.

Completed!

Title: With Mankind as with Womankind
Genre: Romantic
Summary: A gay teenger struggles to fit in with his family and church while coping with his feelings for an older student.
Link: post537525.html?highlight=#537525

Title: Really?
Genre: Romantic
Summary: It's about two guys who are kind of on a date, and the main character's really nervous. It's pretty short.
Link:http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic46341.html

Both be done, minions!

Neeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeexxxxxt!

? Please?