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Colt:

Colt smiled as she started to doze off. He traced circles on her hand.

"You really need to leave, sir, only family can stay." The doctor said coming in.

"Well I'm not leaving." Colt replied. "I've been away from her for far to long and I'm not about to leave now. You'll have to call security to drag me out, and trust me they'll have to drag me."

"Sir, I rather not have to do that." The doctor replied.

"That's what you'll have to do." He replied looking at Annie's sleeping face.

"Alright." The doctor left and Colt kissed Annie's forehead.

"Don't kill me if I'm not here, they might acctually try and drag me out." He said softly. "I love you though."
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Annie

"Just tell them you're my fiiance they'll let you stay then."

The doctor came back in, "Sir-"

"I'm her fiance if it makes a difference?"

He sighed, "it would have saved us a lot of trouble if you had told me this before."

"Sorry."

"Alright."
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Colt:

Colt frowned and looked down at Annie. "I thought you were asleep." He laughed.

"Not yet, I think it would've been interesting to watch them drag you out." She smiled.

"They would've had to." He replied stroking her hand. "I do love you, Annie." He smiled softly.

"I love you too." She smiled.

"Now sleep love!" He smiled.
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Annie

I sighed, "fine."

I slowly drifted off to sleep. Next time I woke up Colt was gone. I sighed I had just dreamed it up. Damn.

He poked his head around the corner, "you're awake."

I grinned and sat up propping myself against a pillow. "Did you bring me food?"

He pulled a tray out in front of him, "that I did."
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*hey guys, i just so totally remebered i was in this story book but i forgot where i was. does someone mind bringing me in? Im Mariisa flanders.*
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Colt:

Colt smiled as she started to eat and he grabbed a carrot from her tray chewing on it.

"Do you know when the doctors are going to let me out?" She asked smiling.

"Nope, but I hope it's soon. I don't like hospitals." He smiled. "Especially when your the one in here."


Senra:

Senra bounced Cale on her knee as she watched Phil fixing the crib. "Thanks a ton for letting us stay here." She smiled.

"I'm not about to let you stay by yourself, they still won't arrest that guy. Do you reconize him at all?" Phil asked wiping his forehead.

"Nope, never saw him before that I know of. I mean, he looks a little familiar, but not really."
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Colt:

Colt smiled as she started to eat and he grabbed a carrot from her tray chewing on it.

"Do you know when the doctors are going to let me out?" She asked smiling.

"Nope, but I hope it's soon. I don't like hospitals." He smiled. "Especially when your the one in here."


Senra:

Senra bounced Cale on her knee as she watched Phil fixing the crib. "Thanks a ton for letting us stay here." She smiled.

"I'm not about to let you stay by yourself, they still won't arrest that guy. Do you reconize him at all?" Phil asked wiping his forehead.

"Nope, never saw him before that I know of. I mean, he looks a little familiar, but not really."
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Annie

I smiled and opened my jello, "I'm surprised I didn't break any limbs."

"Me too."

The nurse wandered in, "Ma'am when can I leave?"

"There's some complications we weren't aware of it'll be a while."

As if on cue I dropped my spoon and blacked out.


Phil

"Well until then, and then anytime after that you want, here's your home."

She smiled shyly at me.

"Cole as far as I'm concerned on a personal level," I continued, "Is my son." I turned to face her, "unless you say otherwise."

She paused and looked like she was on the verge of tears, "you would really do that?"

"I am," I stepped towards her and finally forced the words I had wanted to say for months out, "I love you Sen. Whereever you go I will follow so long as you say you want me to."
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Senra:

Senra let the tears run down his face. "I love you too. Please don't leave me." She cried.

*tears*

Colt:

"Whats wrong with her?" He demanded. "What aren't you telling me!"
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Phil

My arms tightened around her, "so you wouldn't be apposed to a permanate place here?"

"What about Annie?"

"She has Colt, and she's more self sufficent than I am."

"What do you mean?"

"She can live without you, I cannot."
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Senra:

"I'm sure you could." Senra blushed leaning into his arms. She breathed in deeply. "I'm not sure I can live without you though." She breathed out softly.

*grrr*


Colt:

"I need to get the doctor." The nurse said hurrying out.

"WHATS WRONG WITH HER!" Colt yelled after her. H ewasn't leaving Annie's side though. He held her hand tightly waiting for the doctor.
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Phil

I smiled, "so what about dinner now?"

"Hm...Spegetti sounds good."

"Something I know by heart how to make!"

She giggled.



Annie

Soem conciousness returned to me, coupled with intense pain.

"It hurts Colt," she groaned. "Make it stop."

"I'm trying sweetie I'll make it stop."

I withered in agony I wanted to die, that would be a reprieve from this.

"Where does it hurt?" he implored

"Everywhere," I groaned. "Can I die now?"
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Colt:

"No!" Colt said. He wanted to take all of her pain and have to take it himself. "You can't die."

"I'll give her pain killers." THe doctor said as he put some stuff into her system.

"Hold in there, love." He said softly.

"It hurts." She cried. He stroked her hair.

"Honey, I know, I'd feel it myself if I had to, but I can't take the pain away." He said softly.


SEnra:

"I'll make some sauce." SHe smiled. She mixed some mushrooms into the sauce and smiled. "Smells good."
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Annie

I withered and shuddered. "Please," I begged.

"Please what love?"

"Let me die."

"No!" his sudden anger startled me. "You will be okay, it will stop."

"She's bleeding internallly, a rib punctured a lung."


Phil

My cell ringed in my pocket, I pulled it out and flipped it open not bothering with the caller ID

"Hello?"

"Phil!" It was Colt, his paniced tone worried me.

"Yeah?"

"Annie's dying."

"She's what?"

"She got hit by a car when she was here and one of her ribs punctured a lung, not enough to do sevear immediate damage but she's in so much pain she wishes she could die and slowly she is."

"Oh god."

"Help me."

"What can we do?"
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Colt:

"I really don't know." Colt moaned. "She needs blood, type A or something, I'm B positive."

"I am too." Phil said softly.

"What's going on?" He heard Senra demanded in the back ground. He heard Phil quickly tell her. "I'm 'O negative'." It sounded like she snatched the phone. "We're coming down there, hang in there."

"Thanks so much Senra."

"No problem, just hold in there."


Senra:

Senra walked ot the bed room and packed her things grabbing Cale. "You comng?" She asked Phil looking at him. He jumped into action and did the same.

"Let's get down there."
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