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brian:

I laughed. "As you wish gorgeous. want to grab something to eat?" I asked, smiling. I felt shivers all over my arms and I growled inwardly. I sighed and smiled at her.




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"I play a little of everything," Vincent replied. "Well… classical not so much, but I play for the school jazz band and can handle most modern stuff. I've been fishing around for a local band that needs a pianist, actually, but so far no luck."

At that moment another girl appeared at the door… Arabella was her name, and she was in Vincent's first hour class. She turned to leave, but Vincent called her back.

"You're welcome to stay," he said. "Audra and I are simply conducting a little small talk. Speaking of which, Audra, what makes up your piano background, now that you know mine?"
"Buy, buy, buy, buy; sell, sell, sell
How well you've learned to not discern;
Who's foe and who is friend,
We'll own them all in the end."




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***DR, it isn't Brian.***

Dusty:

"Sure, where are the others do you know?" She asked putting some books in her locker then looking at him.

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Colt:

"Ok, so I'm feeling really out of the loop at the moment. What are y'all talking about?" Colt demanded looking at all three.

*Tears*
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Sybyla

"I'm Sybyla, but people call me Sib if they bother to talk to me." I reached out a tentitive hand to shake his and then tuck a peice of hair behind my ear before some stuff slipped and I had to catch it.

"Are you sure I can't carry any of that for you?"

I nodded, "I'm sure." The rest of my stuff tumbled out of the new hole in my bag and I gramanced. "On second thought..."
I just lost the game.




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Kaleb:

Kaleb scooped the stuff up and smiled. "It's good to meet you Sib." He smiled as they walked away from the class. He studied her from the corner of his eye. She had beautiful black hair and eyes that looked almost a dark violet. He frowned inwardly. What was he doing talking to her. She probably had other friends to get to. If they bother to talk to me Her words flew back in his mind. "What do you mean, if they bother to talk to you?" He asked looking at her.
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Sybyla

Oh shit. "People don't really like to talk to me thats all," I said shrugging the question off as if it didn't feel like a needle stabbing at my heart.

"Why?"

Again I shrugged, "They just don't like to I guess. I'm a little too intimitating for them."

He laughed, "you don't look that scary to me."
I just lost the game.




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Kaleb:

"Your also twice my size if not more." She smiled. Kaleb bent down so he was about her height.

"Nope, still not scary." He smiled standing back up all the way. "Your eyes are guarded. But that's about it, and that isn't really all that scary." He replied shrugging.
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Sybyla

I looked up at him, a small smile curving my lips as my heart cracked open and a little peice went off to him. "You seem to be the only one."

"Don't you have any friends?"

I shook my head and started walking before I started crying like I knew I would.
I just lost the game.




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Kaleb:

"I know one person here, and that is cause she is my neighbor." He smiled. "Make that two people now." He was confussed when he saw saddness etched on her face. "Are you ok?"

Make a fool of yourself, you never talk this much and there is a reason for it, so you don't scare people away! His mind yelled at him.


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Sybyla

I smiled faintly at him, "yeah, I'm okay. Or at least I will be soon." I didn't know if it was a lie or not. I hoped it wasn't.
I just lost the game.




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Kaleb:

"I didn't do anything did I?" He asked softly looking down at her. "Cause I have a tendency to scare people when I don't mean to." He looked down at the books and stuff in his hands hoping that he wasnt' the cause of her being upset. He liked talking to her what little they had done, and he didn't want to mess that up. But being his size made it hard not to mess it up.
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Sybyla

"No," I smiled, "you didn't do anything."

He looked nervously skeptical, "are you sure?"

I nodded again, forcing the happy part of me out. "I'm sure."
I just lost the game.




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Kaleb:

"Good." he smiled looking up at her. "But that fake smile isn't working." He said looking at her. "If you don't mind my asking, what's wrong?"

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Sybyla

I blinked in surprise, that smile could fool anybody!

"Y-I-wow."

"Wow what?" he asked in utter confusion.

"That was my most genuine smile I could fake, nobody's ever second guessed that before. At least they didn't when they talked to me."

"Its not as good as it used to be then. What's wrong?"
I just lost the game.




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Kaleb:

"Nothing. So where did you move from?" She asked. He shook his head.

"No changing the subject, what's wrong?" that's right, keep bugging her so she'll stop tlaking to you. GOod job, idiot. He kicked himself in the rear mentally for it, but he wasn't giving up.
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