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**A few side notes from me:

Please be sure to post your character's relationships in the DT! I'm having a hard time figuring out who's single and who's not. Also, I'd like it if people could start posting this at the top of their post:

Name -- ___ Period

Obviously, you'd fill in the blank with a number. I'm assuming we're going on a block schedule. so it'd be any where from 1-4. If it's after school, perhaps putting a general time would help? This way we wouldn't have to worry about the odd time-lapse type things.


Leahwierd >> please put spaces between your paragraphs, and through your post. It makes it easier to read.

Lastly, if someone could bring me in it'd be much appreciated!! ^_^ I'm lost!**
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(Eh. I'm quite guilty of not following the other plot lines. I know the conversation between Vincent and Audra is happening before class, but I have no idea what time of the day it is for all you other guys. >>

But I'm sure you guys can work it out. Until then, I'm just going to chug along.)

Vincent -- 0 Hour

Vincent rose from the bench and walked toward Audra, hand outstretched in greeting.

"Vincent Wicker," he said. "I usually don't get up early, but there's no electric piano at my house, so sometimes I come and play the one here."

He smiled. "But I'm getting ahead of myself, no? What's your name, and what brings you here so early?"
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ahhhh....im lost....help. im going to start out as a new kid, is that ok? ill act like im coming in tomorrow.

Marissa:

Beep....beep....

Marissa sat up instantly, wipping the sweat from her brow. Not another bad dream. She was haunted by the dreams of her fatehr raping her again and again. It scared the crap out of her.

Oh god! I gotta start school today. Marissa thought.

"Marissa!" Her grandma called. "Time to get up. Hurry up, I let you sleep in. Get up and get dressed for school.

"I'm coming Granny!" She hollered as she threw the covers off of her, reveileing the brusises along her legs.

- - - - - (later that morning)

Marissa took a deep breath as she stepped into ther classroom. All heads turned towards her. She flashed a forced smile.

"Ah. You must be Marissa?" The teacher asked. "Why don't you take a seat." She stated.

Marissa smiled and headed for the closest desk, which happened to be in the first row.

This is going to be a long day Marissa sighed. She glanced at the kids around her then folded her arms on her desk, and buried her face in them.

- - - - - - - - (later on that day.)

Marissa skipped lunch like she always did, and headed for the nearest bathroom.

Sitting in a stall, so no one would see her bruises, she hastly checked her legs. Welts of bruises lined her calves, deep purple and blue.

Damn you dad! She mentally cursed, as she ran her fingers along the scar where her dad has tried to stab her, only succeeding in managing a deep cut from her knee to the middle of her calf.

She wore a long-sleeve shirt that coverev her wrist where there was a faint showing of bruises starting up. Her pants just about covered her tennis shoes.

As she walked out, the bell rang signaling for the start of her next class. She was making her way down the hall when she ran into a guy.

"Sorry." She muttered, before heading to walk around them.

"It's ok. Hey are you new here?" He asked.

"Yeah." She glanced into his eyes. all she could think was Beautiful eyes

*That's is all I have.*
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Colt----- Lunch

Colt kept from looking up surprised. busted? for what? He wasn't going to ask though, it wasn't his place. He frowned. The waitress walked over and handed them their food and he started eating happy for the distraction.


Dusty----Period before lunch

Dusty looked at Kaleb and smiled. She ahd finished the math problems and was bored. He was done too, his eyes just searching the room. She grabbed a peice of paper and quickly jotted a note down.

What's up? She slipped it to him and he looked down.

Kaleb----Period before Lunch

Nuthin, who;s that girl next to Chris? He asked passing it back to her.

I don't know. Don't think I've really ever talked to her before. She said passing it back.
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Sybyla

Chris kept on flirting with me the whole class peroid, it was rather distracting, and annoying. I was grateful when the bell rang. I gathered my stuff up quickly and rushed from the room.

My bag snagged on the door and I slipped, sending my stuff flying everywhere.

"Shit." I murmered and scrabled to get my papers before they were stepped on. One of my books was suddenly obstructing my view.
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Kaleb--- Lunch

Kaleb jumped up wanting to get out of the room when he saw the girl's papers fly everywhere. He quickly bent down and scooped them up holding them otu to her. He was so big he blocked others from getting through the door so he stood up and moved out of the way making sure the girl was out of the way too.


Dusty---Lunch

Dusty started for the door. Chris stopped to talk to the girl again and she grabbed his arm pulling him towards their lockers. "Leave her be, give someone else a shot at meeting the girls." SHe smiled letting his arm go and laughing.
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ok..where am I?
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Audra

I took his hand shyly. I wasn't used to this kind of greeting...most people just said "Hi" and walked on.

But it was nice. I actually liked it.

"I'm Audra Goss," I said, "and I had the same idea. I don't like going outside; it's too loud and dramatic, so I usually come here and just...play around."

Cool. We were almost the same.

I gestured to the piano. "How long have you been playing, and what all do you know?"
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Tanner~

Tanner smiled at the waiter as he laid the food on the table, her stomach growling in hunger. She smiled lightly and took a small peice of the fried, caramel covered banana and stuck it in her mouth, chewing slowly. "I can't go anywhere this Friday. I gotta help my dad sell. He's just grew some more weed and threatened to take my car if I didn't so I gotta." Tanner sighed lightly and took another small bite.
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Sybyla

"Thanks," I muttered collecting the jumbled mass of papers. "I should really get a portfolio organizer or something."

Why was I talking to him? He didn't seem the type to be the least bit interested in talking to me.

He laughed slightly, "probably. You got it all there?"

I stood up and came only to his chest. Geeze I was short. And holy hell he was tall! I craned my neck to look at him, "you're tall." I muttered.
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Arabella - before first period

I slipped into the Choral room, hoping to find it empty. Instead I found a boy and girl sitting at the piano talking.

"Oh, I...um...I'm sorry..." I said, turning to leave.

"You don't have to go," the boy said, stopping me.

"Um...okay," I replied. This was my first period anyway, and I recognized the boy as Vincent, who was also in my first hour.

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Kaleb:

"Ya, I know." He sighed. "Can I carry anything for you?"

"I-I think I got it." She smiled rearranging some stuff in her hands.

"Oh, ok." He took a deep breath and looked around. He wanted to talk to her more. "I'm Kaleb." He said sticking his hand out.


Colt:

Weed! Colt's mind screamed. He blinked and ate some more food.
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hey bella, elijah isnt claimed is he? cause if he's not could he be the guy i bumped into in the hall?
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Lucinda~(lunch)

"You want me to help?" I asked her. I didn't normally like to but I didn't want her to be alone.
"You don't have to Luce." She looked down and I slid her the napkin that read:
'Don't worry, I'm not going to leave you alone with your dad selling weed! Don't fight me on this.' I smiled lightly at her.
Alastair shook his head, he hated when I hung around her dad and brother because her brother had once tried to rape me but nothing really happened.
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Tanner~ (Lunch)

Tanner smiled lightly and shook her head. "No. Not this time...Especially after what happened last time," she laughed, regreting what she'd said.

"What happened last tami?" Ally asked in a low growl.

"Oh, shit," Tanner hissed, looking down at her plate and beginning to pick at the food. You tell him! She wrote and slid it to Lucinda.
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