Hi Kitty, your last review was wonderful, so I would love it if you would look at my latest poem. I'm particularly interested in how you interpret it and how I could make the meaning stronger/tighter. Here's the link: topic80667.html
Your critique on my 'Weathered' poem was so awesome that I felt the need to come back for another, if thats alright! I'll review something of yours in return, if you'd like ;D
Its an Allegory on the poem Fire and Ice by Robert Frost for a contest, hence why I need the critiques! So brutality is a must ;D None of that 'it was good in these aspects but...'. The meaner and harsher you are, the happier this person is!
~Walker
Suppose for a moment that the heart has two heads, that the heart has been chained and dunked in a glass booth filled with river water. The heart is monologuing about hesitation and fulfillment while behind the red brocade the heart is drowning. - R.S
Hey there =]. I was wondering if you would mind reviewing one of my short stories? It's titled Breathe. I would very much appreciate it =]] topic81071.html#p863051
Hi, I posted a new piece, and I was hoping you could review it for me, cause I really like your reviews Anyway, I hope it's not too long or boring. Thanks.
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