Adrift

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hey guys what happened? this is a good storybook....hey bbb? cna i borrow your idea for adrift and make it a book? i got a really good plot for it...plus a bunch of ideas....?please?
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I just dont know what to put. :'(
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Blah...I miss this storybook...it was good while it lasted!
Porcelain skin stained with tears,
Hands covering her face to hide from her fears.




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hey lets get this party started someoen post something!
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Ryder:


Ryder watched ehr storm off then slowly stood up and walked towards the woods. they needed shelter, and they needed it fast. He would have to work on some lean-tos for shelter until they had more sunlight, time, and energy.



*tears, sorry, don't know when I'll be on again.**
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Mary Anne.

Mary Anne stormed off and plopped down next to a tree, the branches shading her from the sun.

"Stupid men, think they know everything!" Drawing stick figures in the sand, she looked up to see Ryder, gatherign limbs, and firewood.

"Now what's he up too?" she grumbled to herself.

Getting up, she walked over to him. "Need some help?" She asked.

He jumped.

"Um...yeah I guess." He replied, bending to pick up another branch.

*sorry thats all ive got. we seriously need soem romance going on*
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Ryder:

Ryder stacked the sticks up using the bigger ones to start making lean-tos.

"What are you doing?" She asked.

"Making shelter." He replied as he finished the first one quickly. He had done this enough in boyscouts. He finsihed a few then started a fire.
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Mary Anne:

She stood there for a moment, dumbfounded.

"Oh...right. Do you need any help?"
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Ryder:

"If me being a man won't be a problem." He replied lifting some more wood.


*Grrrr*
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**guys need a little help? I'd join but I don't wanna intrude**
We're meant to be one
I know we are...
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Then you are my star... ™




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go ahead and join. its old anyway. you can be one of the survivors. Tn im lost....wait..no im not.

Mary Anne:

Sarcastic ain't he? she asked herslef as she bent o pick up wood along side him.

"No that ain't a problem." This is going to be a long day.
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Ryder

Ryder smiled and picked up more wood stacking it up. He finnally stopped motioning her to too.

"Come on, doesn'tmake sense for us to wear ourselves out." He smiled.
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Mary anne:

"Ok." she said as she put the wood in a pile along side his.

"What now?"
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Ryder:

"Sit and rest." Ryder replied reclining a little. "Doesn't make sense to work yourself plumb into the ground when we're gonna need our strength for other tasks later on."
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Mary anne:

Yeah. I know what you mean." Relaxing, she leaned against the tree next to him.

"I'm getting bored. I thinnk I'll go find something for us to eat." She stood back up before he could say something.

"What would you like sir?" She giggled as she tried to act as a waitress.
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