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Fianna-

Her stomach growled at the hunger that was irritating her, groaning she stood. She was a little wobbily but she managed.

"Alright I'm hungry...I don't know about you guys but I'm going to hunt something to eat, anyone can come if they think they can handle it," she said licking her lips and sharpening her hunter's knife on a rock.
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Hands covering her face to hide from her fears.




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Lorna Jones

She sat, misty eyed at the shore edge, listening to a girl talk about hunting.

Hunting? Why, we'll be rescued soon, obviously. They'll be out there right now, looking for us and the boat. We'll all be fine and I can get back to the office.

She looked around the the scattering of people, her minds not 'all there' in her head as she released a soft sigh. All she had to do was wait.
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Mary anne:

Mary anne felt someone shaking her gently. Seh opened her eyes to find Ryder.

"How do you feel?" He asked.

"Like crap." SHe moaned, stuggling to sit up. "What happened?" She asked.

"Umm, the boat sorta crashed and now we are stuck on this island." HE mumbled.

"Oh..." Was all she could say.
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***Don't really know what to say. :'( ******



Ryder--

"We need to get off the beach." Ryder said helping her up. He helped her to where there were trees. "I need to get the others. I don't know how hight the tide comes up here, but it looks like it comes up really far."

He moved towards where there were some people. HIs side started to hurt and he ignored it. He'd keeping goicng utnil he couldn't anymore. Everyone had to be moved, and fast.
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Mary Anne:

Mary Anne watched as Ryder help move the people oput of the way of the tide.
oh god what are we going to do? she prayed silently.

As he finished, she noticed he was holding his side. When he reached her, she asked "Ryder are you alright?"

"Yeah, I think." he replied, wincing as he sat down beside her.

"No your not. I think I can tell when someones hurt." She said stubbornly.


*sorry dont have nothing else.*
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Ryder---

"I'm perfectly fine." He smiled laying back and refusing to allow himself to wince. He couldn't show he was in pain then they would owrry about him instead of the people that were really in trouble. It's probably just a really bad bruise. He thought.
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Mary Anne:

"Riiigggggggghhtt..." She said letting her word travel to express her meaning.

*sorry short gotta go*
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Ryder--

"I am, I've been run over by a bull and walked around. I'm perfectly fine. Plus if it was anything bad I wouldn't have been able to pull people ashore." He replied.
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Lorna Jones

She shook her head and pulled herself from the trance she had seemed to enter as she watched the once thrashing waves lick clamly at the shore, leaving light trails of frothy clouds on the sand.

She glanced over her shoulder and frowned as the rest of the beach appeared empty. Where was everyone? They were there a minute ago. Panic set in and she scrabbled to her feet, looking right out across the sand for signs of life.

Should couldn't be alone.
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She was dumbstruck, "What's with you all? You hate me or something? Or are you just not hungry...?" She took her hand to her chin, "You know if there is no animals on this island we can always eat eachother if there is no other option," she said with a big grin plastered on her face.
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***Don't let it die***
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*dont let what die? this story book? never i dont care if im the last and only person writin gin it, im probably gonna ask bbb if i can make a book out of it. i have a very good plot for it.*

Mary anne:

She swore to herself. Men! They think they know everything.

"Ok! Whatever you say." She threw her hands up in frustration, pulling herslef to her feet. "I was just worried." After having said that, she stormed off a few yards then plopped down on the ground near another personto see if he was ok.

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Sorry, folks. Gotta drop out. My character is a worthless bum with nothing to do. :wink:
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Fianna-

Sighing she walked towards a tree, slumping against it she held her face in her palms, "No one talks to me, eh? This is where Aaron could come in handy.

She closed her eyes and relived the memory, if only he hadn't died, she wouldn't feel so lonesome.
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** Gonna be dropping out for a while, but not for long. Say, next week tops. **
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