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Ryder:

"To come help, ma'am. Cause we don't know what are back in those woods." He smiled standing up and following her his ribs starting to give him some trouble again.

*tears*
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MAry anne:

She noticed his wince as he stood up.

"Are you sure your side is fine?" She asked, starting to become worried.
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Ryder:

"I'll survive." He replied following her into the woods. "A little pain never killed anyone."


*cry*
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Mary anne:

She rolled her eyes with his comment.

"Whatever. You go ahead and..." She stepped in a hole and let out a cry.

"OWWWWWWWWW!" She sat down on the ground and and grabbed her foot. What am I going to do now?

"Ahhh...I will not cry! Ryder, please help me up." She asked, gropping for his hand. She winced as she tried to balance her wieght on her good foot.

*i didn't know what youd say*
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***Don't worry about what he would say. Just think about it. I will go with it. It helps my writing.***

Ryder:

Ryder carefully unwedged her foot then picked her up. She wasn't very heavy at all. "What do you eat?" He laughed.

"What?" She demanded.

"You weigh less then my smallest dog." He smiled. "And he's pretty small."
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Mary anne:

She rolled her eyes. "Very funny. I can't help it I'm skinny, it's natural"

he continued to hold her but didn't say anything.

*ekk...brain freeze..now what?*
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Ryder:

Ryder carried her back to where the fire was and laid her down. "I got more things to tend to." He said setting her down.

"I'm coming." She said tryin to get up.

"You can't walk." He persisted.

"Yes, I can." She managed to get up, but walking was another story. He rolled his eyes and swooped her up, better to have someone around anyways, even if he had to carry her. "Put me down! You can' hike carrin me."

"Yes I can, you don't weigh anything." He replied not looking at her as he went to explore teh woods.
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can you still join? :shock:


Name: Alan Mildstream

Age: 20

Sex: Male

Description: Free spirited guy who likes to take it loose, But if there is work to be done he will do it. light brown skin, black curly hair, dark brown eyes, medium weight, 189 cm long, muscular hands and legs, a bit chubby from the stomach area (and butt) big lips. (WHOA he looks exactly like me but only 6 ½ years older :D )

Personality: Loves fun, can be strict if he must. Loves cooking and girls :P

Extra Information: Hates: racism, Insects that bite, nocturnal animals, bees. Keen to try things, He has his trusty comp still with him.
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*same question as above*

Name:Rebbecca Jones (hey its me lol)

Age:19 (plus 5 and half years older)

Sex:female

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Rebbecca is a fun-loving girl, who would do any thing to get a fun life. She is usually stuck in college with her best friend Sian,but Sian died. Rebbecca wanted to get away from the college and all the people around there. She hates near death and bugs *hehe* Her biggest fear is of falling. She has been living with her parents Emily and Jospesh since she was young, but They have just split up and ague over everything. Hows rebbecca ment to live with that.

Personality: Shes a wimp, but she will try anything,if she had to jump of a roof to save someones life, she would.

Extra Information:up for love
Every rose has it's thorn..
Just like every night has it's dawn.


I've matured a lot and I realised it was time to come back.. for good!




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*yea you can but youll hace to start off from where we are. Lord, you can start by running into me and ryder. i dont know about you reb. but you can still join i think*

Mary anne:

"This is so not fun!" She complained, though she snuggled closer in his arms. "Must you insist on carrying me?" she inquired.

"Yes." he said simply, his grip on her tightened as her rounded a curve, spotting a nice layout of land.

"This should be a good place to make camp...what do you think?" he asked, still holding her.

"I... think its ok...now could you let me down?" she didn't want to tell him she was beginnning to become uncomfortable with him holding her.

He looked down at her and smiled. "Maybe I like holding you."

She just gaped up at him, he was so handsome.

Oh my god, what am I going to do? she asked herself.
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ALAN:

Alan had been going around the island for days. He had not seen a soul since he arrived, thus he was startled to see a man running at him with a woman in his hands (Lovers?) was the first thing that popped into his mind (perhaps.) he thought.
"Hallo!" Alan shouthedto them, they did not seem to notice, "Hello!!" He shouted again and this time the man looked his way. Alan ran to them "Hello I'm Alan Mildstream."


*short?* :D
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*no its fine.*

MAry anne:

"Hello!" a voice came from the distance.

She smiled as a man came running towards them.

"Hi." he breathed, out of breath.

"Hi."m she replied.

She looked up at Ryder, who was still watching her.
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Alan:

Alan looked at the two people.
The man seemed to be looking at the woman all the time, while the woman's gaze sifted from the man to Alan.
"Ahem." Alan coughed "Am I interrupting something?" The woman blushed at that moment and started mumbling in a almost panic like tone "No! no, your not interrupting anything."

Alan looked suspicious "Are you sure?" Alan asked "I would not want to interrupt to lovers, ya' know."
The woman turned even more red (which at the moment was a miraculous achievement)
She mumbled something that Alan could not hear. Now even the man was looking at him "Hello. I'm Ryder he said."
Alan smirked "Hello Ryder." Alan turned to the girl who was now trying to get off of Ryder's arms "I didn't catch your name." Alan mentioned
The woman looked at him "Mary Anne. And were not lovers." she said a bit frustrated
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Ryder:

Ryder laughed setting Mary Anne down on the ground. "She twisted her ankle, but got bored so we started walkin around lookin for a good campsite." Ryder replied. "GAve me an earful the whole way here too." He smiled at the man then walked around the opening laying out plans for the area. He was always a go getter when it came to survival.

"What are you doing?" Mary Anne asked her voice still sounding mad at him.

"Layin out camp plans, we need to be organized." he replied.
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Alan

"I have a small hut close by." Alan said to Ryder who was starting to set camp
Alan pointed to the east "It's about three hundred meters from me; by a small river." Alan was already walking towards his camp as he waved for the two people to follow him
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