Young Writers Society

Another 3B storybook?

Plot: You are taking a cruise. It is lovely! Everything is going as planned. You snorkel, swim and eat all you can eat. You sleep in small cabins. The maid service is splendid! And then the captain recieves horrifying images on the radar: a hurricane is coming and the ship doesn't have time to get away. The huge storm hits and the boat is sent crashing into an island. You awake. You are lost.

Rules: You know the rules.
- No god moding

- No fantasy creatures. This is a real storybook and it will only have things that could really happen in it.

- If you give up on the storybook, your character becomes NP. (non playable)

- Keep swearing to a minimum.

Profiles:

Name:

Age:

Sex:

Description:

Personality:

Extra Information:

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Name: Brendon Jones

Age: 35

Sex: Male

Description: Completely bald. His hair fell out when he was 29. Rather strong, but would rather work indoors because he is a writer. He is currently writing a novel, and is taking a break from it on the cruise.

Personality: Strong-willed and a leader. Stern, yet compassionate.

Extra Information: His wife was killed in the boat crash.

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Get going!

Name: Valerie Jenks

Age: 19

Sex: Female

Description: frizzy blonde hair, dark purple glasses, pale and freckled.

Personality: Quiet-ish, slightly sarcastic, and easily obsessed. Also a writer, (am I allowed to do that?) but is currently obsessed with poetry. Is always trying to think up rhymes for stuff.

Extra Information:
Homeschooled. Went on the cruise to see the world, after a horrible case of cabin fever.

Name: Naomi Jade

Age: 20

Apperance: http://photobucket.com/mediadetail/?med ... geOffset=1

Occupation: Writer, Artist, Band member, and song writer

Personality: Sweet, Caring, Romantic, and Fun-loving

Extra Information: Up for love...she was on the ship with her fiancee and band...but they die later on.

You stole my idea BBB...Ah well.

David Jackson
Age: 23
Apperance: Tan from spending 2 year's in the Arabian peninsula. Brown hair, blue eyes, and fuzz on his face.
Occupation: Peace corps
reason for Being on ship: being transfered to Asia.
Personality: After 10 year's of being bullied, David decided to join the peacecorps at the age of 21 so he can improve the world. He is very sarcastic but will help when neccecary.

ohhhh i like this....


Name: Mary Anne Nicholes

Age: 21

Descirption: Basically she loves the outdoors, and is an extreme environmentalist. Owns a horse ranch back at home. She came onthis trip bacause she just needed a break.

Occupation: Forest Ranger

Appearance: http://charmed911.files.wordpress.com/2007/01/piper09.jpg

History: She was adopted at birth. Grew up in a nice home.

Other: none that i can think of besides she is shy and sweet and intelligent.

Name: Lorna Jones

Age: 29

Sex: Female

Description: Bright green eyes with a tidy mop of auburn hair. Stands at a tall 5'11". Wrinkles are beginning to form on her brow and at the corners of her eyes from her stressful work, and she's taking a cruise to get away from it, coutesy of her sister.

Personality: Likes to be in charge and clashes with anyone who gets in her way. Very passionate about dancing and become nostalgic as she realises how lonely she really is.

Extra Information: She has fallen out with her parents.



This sounds like a good idea.

***You do relize there is one like this, just a plane crash and no one knows why it did yet. ***

Name: Ryder

Age: 22

Sex: Male

Description: He is a Texan, big guy! He owns a ranch, and is used to hard work. He is a good 6'6 with a very broad chest. He is all muscle, tan skin, bright blue eyes, black hair.

Personality: Sweet, he is like a big teddy bear, he can be just as mean as a bear though too. He is more likely to jump in front of a bullet for someone then to shoot someone, but I"m sure if you angered him enough he would pull the trigger.

Extra Information: His mom forced him to go on the cruise, he is a single very wealthy ranch owner and she said maybe he would meet someone. He doesn't like not having his feet on the ground, but he went anyways because he needed a break. If some people fall out and he does too, he will grab as many as he can and try to swim them back in to shore. He's up for fallin in love too.

Hey TN can i call dibbs on Your character?

Of course.

Just to keep this thread on top of the chart, I'm going to start my story on the ship if that's okay...

David Jackson felt the heat hit him as he went inside the sauna
" I love having a hot sweat...."
He looked up at one of the other passengers as he slumped there.
" Don't you agree Mr. Jones?"
The passenger looked up suspiculy.
" How did you know my name?"
" Because you forgot to take off your shirt which has your nametag on it."
The man looked at himself and then took the shirt off and slumped again.
" Aw, what's the matter doc? Your on a beautiful cruise ship, there's women, music, women, shuffleboard, the sun, women, high dining...You think I'm forgetting Women?"
" I'm not a doctor, I'm a writer."
" Really? You look like a doc. Your not even sweating. How is it that a man can't sweat in a suana?"
Jone's sighed.
" I'm tired, I don't need to talk to someone like you."
" Come on doc...tell me, Sauna word of honor."
Jone's looked at David and smiled.
" Ah there you go Doc, it look's nice on you."
" It's...well, My book's are taking a nose dive. And it's very stressful with my agent on my back. I thought this cruise would calm me..."
David smiled," Relax doc. All you need to do is just let it all go. Don't worry about a thing. And watch the the sea engulf your mind..."

* cool*

Name: Moe

Age: 14

Sex: female

Description: http://www.elfwood.com/art/l/i/linute/insanity.jpg.html

Personality: she is exstremely wierd. But she is kind and has a normal sanity level for an average person.

Extra Information: She loves red so she weres red contacts.

[Brendon Jones]

Brendon sighed and said, "Yeah. That's what I hoped I would do."

Suddenly remembering, the man stuck out his hand. "My name is Jackson. David Jackson."

Brendon quitely shook his hand and smiled weakly. "Uh, how are you today?"

"I'm doing excellent. You know, on floor five there is this excellent massage..." Jackson's voice became a background rumble as Brendon tuned him out.

Now, about his book... Standfords - his agent - recommened that he should have taken this cruise... but did she really know what he was going to get into? Would she have known that he would meet many annoying tourits?

*I'm new to this whole thing but I'm willing to give it a try*

Name: Fianna Areal Owens

Age: 18

Sex: Female

Description: Long black hair with red tips, dark brown eyes, about 5"4 in height. She is skinny and well built, has some abs.

Personality: Outgoing and a little on the insane side at times. She is a tough girl who looks after herself but is always helpful to those who need a hand.

Extra Information: She won the lottery and is up for love. Her brother dies on the cruise.

Moe-

Here she was on a criuse ship in the middle of the ocean, and she hates the water. Yet her mother somehow convinced her to go with her on this death trap.

Moe was woozy and opened her balcony window. Then she hurled out the window and into the ocean." Ughhhh..." She moaned.

She whiped her mouth and walked back into the room. Moe brushed her teeth and exited her room. She needed to eat.

Name: Basil Hollis (called Vassily)

Age: 31

Sex: M

Description: 5'8, already has grey hair, very lean and wiry. Grey eyes and fair skin; he likes to wear neutral colors.

Personality: Questions everything. Likes to be exact. Is a up-and-down person: will seem to be calm, and lazy, but when confronted with his passions (ballroom dancing, art) will become extremely energetic and good-humored. Very frank and honest.

Extra Information: Professor at a university in (Random City), teaching all kinds of art. Likes to ballroom dance. Skydives every other year. His hobby is marine biology and scuba-diving when he gets the chance. Is called Dr. Vassily and Mr. Hollis by his students, in reference to his semibipolar personality and his favorite short story.