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Ryder:

Ryder pulled Annie close and smiled at Colt.

"I've heard of you. You look alot like your father." The reverand said.

"You knew him?" Colt asked.

"Yes, he was a strange man." The reveand said.

***Tears***

DUsty:

Dusty walked into the room and wrapped her arms around Colt's waist. "Whose this?"

"Reverand Thomas." Colt repleid.

"Hi." She smiled.
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*i forgot what was going on.........*
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***They found the reverand, and that's about it. Don't forget to post on Moonlight***
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I did post on moonlight....i think.

Annie:

Annie stared at the man who called himself a reverend. He looked like it, but she still had an uneasy feeling about him. She sighed and leaned into Ryder.



Colt:

"You knew my father?" he asked, shocked.

The reverend nodded. "He was a strange man." Yeah, he was also a drunk. One who didn't care for his family, and who had deserted his mom when she was prgnant with him. His fater had drifted in and out of his life. He didn't want anything to do with him.

Dusty walked in the room and wrapped her arms around him, smiling at the reverend.

"Whose this?" she asked, still smiling. Colt looked down ad grinned.

"This my Darling, is the reverend." Dusty smilied wider at the man.
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Ryder:

Ryder held Annie as the others talked to the Reverand.

"Alright, we need to let him rest up some. Plus, we need to go fishing." He said as he walked towards the door taking Annie with him.


Dusty:

Dusty smiled and followed Colt, a reverand, how could they get so lucky!







No you didn't., you just put a smiley face.
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:) I'll post soon....i promise.
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Annie:

Annie watched as the men fished and the kids played. Seh sighed as she realized how perfect everything was turning out. It couldn't get any better than this, could it?



Colt:

Colt smiled as he laughed at a joke Ryder said.

"Well, you know Ryder, now that the reverend is here..." Ryder looked at him, understanding his meaning.

"Let's give him time to get settled first before we try adn rush this on him. Besides, I think the girls would need time to make a dress, don't you." Colt burst out laughing. Ryder lifted one eyebrow.

"What's so funny?" Colt just kept luaghing and pointed to his line, where teh cork was gone adn his line was floatign uselessly on the water.

"That my friend, is what is so funny." Ryder threw a worm at him. He looked back at Annie and pure love shown in his eyes. Colt turned to look at Dusty, who was perched beside her, and he felt a wave of love and protection wash over him. Life couldn't get any better, even though they were stranded on an island in the middle of nowhere. Ironic isn't it?
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Ryder:

Ryder smiled at Annie who was now laughing at him too. "Don't lose dinner." She laughed.

"I'll try not to this go around." He smiled before casting his line again.


Dusty:

Dusty smiled back at COlt heat rushing up her face. She was happy here, really happy. It wasn't like the world back home. But it was peaceful.


*tears
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