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Ryder:

"YOu and a wonderful dad. You already treat Kelly like she's your own." Mary Anne smiled back.

"When we get back and if she doens't have any other family I want to make her my own daughter. She is a sweet heart." He smiled. "But first thing I'm gonna do when we get back is make you my wife, course unless you want to plan it." He laughed kissing her again.


Dusty:

"You already treat Kelly like she's your own." Dust heard Mary Anne said. So Kelly wasn't their daughter and they weren't married yet. She shrugged, that didn't matter.

"Something smells good." Colt anooced when they got back to the fire. Kelly had her nose scrunched up at the adult every time they kissed, least until she was handed food then she ignored them.
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Mary anne:

When are you going to start on teh house?" she asked, when they were in the hut alone. Kelly was outside with Colt adn Dusty, playing.

"Probably tomorrow." he said as tehy laid down.

Seh yawned before laying her head on his shoulder. "Night." she sighed before drifting off into sleep.


Colt:

MAry anne adn Ryder had went inside to lay down for awhile and had asked if tehy minded watching Kelly. Dusty had smiled and siad it was no problem. He sat ther lost in thought when he heard his name being called.

"Colt? You okay?" Dusty asked, balancing Kelly on her knee. Kelly laughed as she was bounced up and down.

"Yeah, I was just thinking..about what Ryder told Mary anne." he looked over at Dusty. She was beautiful.

"What did he say?" she asked, stopping her bouncing. Kelly frowned before looking ovefr at Colt.

"About what he wanted to do when we get back to the States. I was thinknign that wasn't such a bad idea." he looked determinely at Dusty, hoping she would get what he was trying to ask.

"What do yo...oh." she swallowed.

"What do you say?" he asked getting up and goign to her, getting down on a knee. Kelly giggled, adn blushed. He ruffled her hair. Turning back to Dusty he asked, "So?"
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Marcus glared. Leal looked between the two.

"That's not true." turning he looked at Leal, hoping she would believe him. He had loved this intruder once, but that was until he had discovered her affair with his brother. He didn't want his heart broken like that again. Leal must have caught the feeling in his eyes because she smiled and turned to face the intruder.

"WEll it doesn't matter, because he has a promise, adn he's not leving until he fulfils it."

"What promise?" the girl asked.
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Dusty:

Dusty bit her lower lip. "I'd love to, but we're not old enough, well I'm not, I'm only seventeen, my dad would never go for that." She sighed tears threatening. "I kinda hope we get stuck here until I'm eighteen then he won't have an say. And if that is the case then I think it would be a great idea too."


Colt:

***have then wake up***
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* ignore my ast post. that was suppose togo in evening rain...*

Mary anne:


Mary anne tried to sit up, but Ryders arm was holding her down. Gently, she nudged him. He didn't wake up. She elbowed him and got a grunt.

"Ryder! Wake up." she groaned, trying to move his arm, onlty suceedingin having his arm lock tighter.

"I'm awake. I just don't want to get up." he said, opening his eyes and smiling at her. Her stomach did a flip.

"We need to get up, because we've been asleep for God knows how long, and I miss Kelly." she made another move to get up, succeeding this time.



Colt:

Colt smiled. He knew exactly what she meant.

"Okay. Hey I wonder wher those other two are up too." He said shaking his head.
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Dusty:

"Probably sleeping." Dusty shrugged pushing hair from her face and staring into the fire.


Ryder:

Ryder slowly got up and moaned. He didn't want to be awake and his side hurt. He walked out into the light and ran his fingers through his hair making it look like a wreck. Kelly, who was sitting by Colt and Dusty, burst out laughing at him and he saw Dusty try to cover her laugh.
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Colt:

Colt turned to see what teh girls were laughing at to find Ryder his hair a mess and a bad mood on his face. He chuckled. This was goin got be a long day. Getting up, he walked over to Ryder.

"So, you ready to start on that house?"

"Yea...Hey how did you know...?" Ryder asked, confused.

"I just thought you would probably want to make a house since we're probably going to be stuck here for a long time."

"Don't jinks us....but that would be nice."



Mary anne:


Mary anne laughed out loud when she caught a sight of Ryder coming out of their hut. Funny how she was referrign to it as thier hut now. She shrugged and walked over to Kelly, who lifted her arms up to her.

"Did you miss me?' She asked, picking her up.




*should we make a profile for Kelly? And where did everyobdy else go?*
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***I guess they stopped posting, and no we don't need a profile for here, here is a pictuer of her if you want one. http://anthonyasael.deviantart.com/art/ ... s-23100494 ***

Ryder:

"We need to gather more logs, let me show you what it will look like." He started drawing in the sand. It would be a rectangular house. With several rooms on both sides and then a huge room in the middle. The roof would be slanted like a normal house and then there would be a make shift fire place. "For the fireplace we'll have to get stones form the creek and other places like that."



Dusty:

Dusty smiled at the site and just sat watching. "Your lucky." She said softly. Mary Anne looked at her confussed.

"How so?"

"Ryder, he loves so much." She replied. "You can tell by the way he looks at you."


***I think we need a little guy play mate for Kelly. :P***
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*yeah i think so too....hmmmm..maybe Ryder adn colt can find him will they are looking for logs?*

MAry anne:

Mary anne shook her head. "He loves me, but I thikn Colt loves you, even if he doesn't show it."


COlt:

Colt nodded his head. "Okay, I think I remember seeing a bunch of rocks by teh river. I can gather some of those later, but we need to worry abou the logs first. I think I smell rain." He lifted his head up, and breathed in.
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Dusty:

"I hope so." She whispered. "He's sweet, he found me after the wreck and we haven't left each other's sight sense then."


Ryder:

"Alright, I found a good spot to get logs from." He said leading Colt back into the owods. He motioned to a few logs. "I made another axe with some rocks." He handed Colt the axe and then he west to start cutting.

"Help!" A small voice called. Ryder froze.

"YOu hear that?"

"Ya." Colt started towards the brush and Ryder put his hand up. Sobbing was coming from the brush and Ryder slowly moved with Colt pushing the brush away. He saw a little boy curled up with his arm pulled to his stomach. He looked pretty cut up.

"Go get me a stick and some vines, make sure they are sturdy." Ryder said squatting next to the boy. "His arm is broke."

"Who are you?" THe boy whimpered.

"I'm Ryder, what's your name?"

"P-P-Paul." The boy whimpered.

"Alright, can I pick you up, Paul?" He asked gently. The boy nodded and Ryder carefully picked him up. Colt walked back over with the stuff and Ryder looked around. "We better get him back to the camp so they can clean him up. I think it is going to rain and we need to get some logs in."
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MAry anne:

She smiled, giving Dusty a curious glance.

"Where are you from Dusrty?"



Colt:

Colt bent to get a stick and some vines, helping Ryder nid the childs arm. Quickly, he picked up the logs and hauled them behind him while Ryder carried the small child in his arms. Teh boy looked about eleven. Heck Kelly was only what? Nine, ten years old. Once his arm healed, he would be a good play mate for Kelly. He sighe and tugged on the logs.
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Dusty:

"Tennessee." Dusty smiled.


Ryder:

Ryder walked over to the fire and smiled at the girls. "Found another one." He said layin the boy down. Kelly ran over and looked down at the boy.

"Is he ok?" She asked.

"He'll be fine." Ryder smiled. "I need to go help COlt." He went back to haul the logs to the clearing."
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Mary anne:

"Really? Me too." MAry anne smiled.


Colt:

Colt sighed as he felt some of the wieght lift off when Ryder grabbed some of teh logs.

"Thanks." He mumbled, pulling hte logs. They finally made it back to teh camp and pild teh logs with the rest.

"Well, I think we're goign ot need more logs." Colt said, shaking his head.
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Ryder:

Ryder laughed, "We're gonna need a ton more." He grinned. "Let's make sure the rooves we have now will hold when it rains then we'll get more while we wait for the rain to ruin our work."


Dusty:

"Cool" Dusty smiled. She looked at the boy who was now talking to Kelly. "I think she is happy there is someone her age."
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MAry anne:

Mary anne agreed with Dusty. She was right. Kelly needed someone here her age.

"So, what do you do for a living, I mean back in teh states that is?"



Colt:

Colt laughed.

"Might as well."He turned adn headed for the woods. A drop of water splashed on his nose.

"Hey Ryder, We might want ot get busy, It's startign to rain."
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