Cal's Fanmix & Proper Critique Central [Edited 10/23/10]

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Mon Mar 03, 2008 9:09 am
Caligula's Launderette says... · Mon Mar 03, 2008 9:09 am
This is not really strictly about writing, but what Sam calls novel-love. I will be posting here updates on proper critiques I am working on, as well as the fanmixes. Also, if you have PC tokens (Proper Critiques) or FM tokens (Fanmix), you can cash them in here.

If I have totally put this is the wrong forum, please feel free to move it.

By the way, a proper critique is a review/critique of someone's work where I properly apply myself to it, thus I print it out and scribble all over it.

;)

Ta,
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Fanmix & Proper Critique Central Edited 11/15/08

Fanmixes List

Fanmixes In-Progress
    Azila: Mix for Snow
    Evi: Mix for [Undetermined Work]
    Poor Imp: The Planet Was Here (Vetrin'iy) & the secret in the back of my skull (Stage-Boy)
    Sam: Et nox facta est! (Lazy Bones)

Proper Critiques In-Progress
    FRAYEDjade: An Artificial Matrimony.
    Hannah: Rubber Immortal [Contest Prizes (4)]
    Kylan: We All Fall Down 2 [Contest Prize] // undertows
    mizz-iceberg: Sentient II [Contest Prize]
    Ohio Impromptu: Stanislavsky's Chainsaw
    Sam: evangelical evangelists have eaten all our food again.
    smorgishborg: Invasion of the Penis Snatchers [Contest Prize]


PC Tokens
    Adnamarine: 1 [Contest Prize]
    Angel of Death: 1 [Contest Prize]
    Azila: 1 [Contest Prize]
    BigBadBear: 3 [Contest Prizes]
    Conrad Rice: 4 [Contest Prizes]
    Evi: 1 [Contest Prizes]
    Gadi: 3 [Contest Prize]
    Hannah: 3 [Contest Prizes]
    HC: 1 [Contest Prizes]
    Jellybean: 1 [Contest Prize]
    Jiggity: 3 [Contest Prize]
    KailaMarie: 2 [Contest Prizes]
    Kylan: 5 [Contest Prize]
    Little Tin Fish: 1 [Contest Prize]
    Medusa: 7 [Contest Prizes]
    Sam: 8 [Contest Prizes]
    Snoink: 3 [Contest Prizes]
    Suzanne: 4 [Contest Prizes]
    TL G-Wooster: 3 [Contest Prize]

FM Tokens
    BigBadBear: 1 [Contest Prize]
    Evi: 1 [Contest Prize]
    Gadi: 2 [Contest Prize]
    Hannah: 1 [Contest Prize]
    HC: 1 [Contest Prize]
    Jellybean: 1 [Contest Prize]
    Jiggity: 2 [Contest Prize]
    KailaMarie: 1 [Contest Prize]
    Kylan: 3 [Contest Prize]
    Little Tin Fish: 1 [Contest Prize]
    Medusa: 3 [Contest Prizes]
    Sam: 2 [Contest Prize]
    smorgishborg: 1 [Contest Prize]
    Suzanne: 1 [Contest Prizes]
    TL G-Wooster: 1 [Contest Prize]
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Mon Mar 03, 2008 12:09 pm
Emerson says... · Mon Mar 03, 2008 12:09 pm
Yay! Novel love!

*squee*
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Tue Mar 04, 2008 9:16 am
Caligula's Launderette says... · Tue Mar 04, 2008 9:16 am
I know.

;)

Proper Critiques Posted 03/04
    Chanson: secrets and caves
    Esmé: Lissie Darcesty, #1 - Saving Tiddles
    JabberHut: Modern Day Outlaw Ch. 1 (pt. 1)
    Kylan: Desperation in Monte Carlo [Contest Prize]
    Leja: A Brief History of the Ex-Dee [Part One] & A Brief History of the Ex-Dee [Part Two]
    TL G-Wooster: Off the Edge of the Rainbow
    Trident: Long Line, Sweetheart

Proper Critiques In-Progress
    BigBadBear: StoweAway
    GryphonFledgling: Mutts
    Leja: Patorfield Peonies
    Ohio Impromptu: Stanislavsky's Chainsaw
    Saint Razorblade: Whiskey on a Sunday, Year 1
    shadowstorm: Abyss of Dawn - Chapter One
    Sleeping Valor: Trial of a Villain (DoaV Revamped) : Prologue P1
    Suzanne: The Party Killers
    Writersdomain: Flames
Fraser: Stop stealing the blanket.
[Diefenbaker whines]
Fraser: You're an Arctic Wolf, for God's sake.
(Due South)

Hatter: Do I need a reason to help a pretty girl in a very wet dress? (Alice)

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Fri Mar 07, 2008 8:03 am
Caligula's Launderette says... · Fri Mar 07, 2008 8:03 am
Proper Critiques Posted 03/06
    GryphonFledgling: Mutts
    Leja: Patorfield Peonies
    Sleeping Valor: Trial of a Villain (DoaV Revamped) : Prologue P1

Proper Critiques In-Progress
    BigBadBear: StoweAway
    Leja: A Brief History of the Ex-Dee #3
    Ohio Impromptu: Stanislavsky's Chainsaw
    Saint Razorblade: Whiskey on a Sunday, Year 1
    Sam: Lazy Bones
    shadowstorm: Abyss of Dawn - Chapter One
    Suzanne: The Party Killers
    Writersdomain: Flames
Fraser: Stop stealing the blanket.
[Diefenbaker whines]
Fraser: You're an Arctic Wolf, for God's sake.
(Due South)

Hatter: Do I need a reason to help a pretty girl in a very wet dress? (Alice)

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Fri Mar 07, 2008 1:28 pm
Ohio Impromptu says... · Fri Mar 07, 2008 1:28 pm
Oooh. wow. Can't wait.

Much appreciated. :wink:
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Mon Mar 10, 2008 11:17 pm
Caligula's Launderette says... · Mon Mar 10, 2008 11:17 pm
:D

Proper Critiques Posted 03/10
    shadowstorm: Abyss of Dawn - Chapter One

Proper Critiques In-Progress
    BigBadBear: StoweAway
    Leja: A Brief History of the Ex-Dee #3
    Ohio Impromptu: Stanislavsky's Chainsaw
    Saint Razorblade: Whiskey on a Sunday, Year 1
    Sam: Lazy Bones
    Suzanne: The Party Killers
    Writersdomain: Flames
Fraser: Stop stealing the blanket.
[Diefenbaker whines]
Fraser: You're an Arctic Wolf, for God's sake.
(Due South)

Hatter: Do I need a reason to help a pretty girl in a very wet dress? (Alice)

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Tue Mar 11, 2008 12:41 am
Leja says... · Tue Mar 11, 2008 12:41 am
Have I ever told you how absolutely wonderful/amazing/awesome you are? :D
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Tue Mar 11, 2008 6:00 am
Caligula's Launderette says... · Tue Mar 11, 2008 6:00 am
*hugs Leja*

:D

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Fraser: Stop stealing the blanket.
[Diefenbaker whines]
Fraser: You're an Arctic Wolf, for God's sake.
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Hatter: Do I need a reason to help a pretty girl in a very wet dress? (Alice)

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Tue Mar 11, 2008 6:10 am
Teague says... · Tue Mar 11, 2008 6:10 am
*blinks* I get a proper critique?

I'm so honoured! *sobs and huggles Cal*

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Mon Mar 24, 2008 8:22 am
Caligula's Launderette says... · Mon Mar 24, 2008 8:22 am
*hugs*

Proper Critiques Posted 3/24

    BigBadBear: StoweAway #1
    PenguinAttack: Lemon Sonata
    Saint Razorblade: Whiskey on a Sunday, Year 1
    Sam: Lazy Bones
    shadowstorm: Abyss of Dawn - Chapter One (Second Part)
    Suzanne: The Party Killers
    yoha_ahoy: Circus Pirates


Proper Critiques In-Progress
    Azila: Farewell, Penelope [Contest Prizes]
    BigBadBear: StoweAway
    Gadi: May [Contest Prize]
    Jennafina: Benedict's Goodbye
    Kylan: Suspensional Combustion [Contest Prize]
    Leja: A Brief History of the Ex-Dee #3
    Ohio Impromptu: Stanislavsky's Chainsaw
    Saint Razorblade: Whisky on a Sunday, Year 2
    Writersdomain: Flames


Ta,
Cal.
Fraser: Stop stealing the blanket.
[Diefenbaker whines]
Fraser: You're an Arctic Wolf, for God's sake.
(Due South)

Hatter: Do I need a reason to help a pretty girl in a very wet dress? (Alice)

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Mon Mar 24, 2008 3:38 pm
Emerson says... · Mon Mar 24, 2008 3:38 pm
OMG Cal I love you. Your critiques make my heart burst with happiness, and remind me how I need to finish my novella so I can get back to my Party-goers.

Thank you so much!
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Mon Mar 24, 2008 4:11 pm
Azila says... · Mon Mar 24, 2008 4:11 pm
You're so organized, Cal! It's amazing that you can keep track of it all to well. :D

*blows a kiss*
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Mon Apr 07, 2008 7:02 am
Caligula's Launderette says... · Mon Apr 07, 2008 7:02 am
I posted another fanmix, this one for Sam's Lazy Bones: Macabre Ticks.

Ta,
Cal.
Fraser: Stop stealing the blanket.
[Diefenbaker whines]
Fraser: You're an Arctic Wolf, for God's sake.
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Tue Aug 05, 2008 9:46 pm
Caligula's Launderette says... · Tue Aug 05, 2008 9:46 pm
It's been ages since I've gathered things together, so I've been trying to get back on track with critiques and prizes and such. I think I've got my numbers correct.

PC Tokens
    Kylan: 2 [Contest Prize]
    Azila: 1 [Contest Prize]
    Gadi: 1 [Contest Prize]
    Sam: 5 [Contest Prizes]
    Suzanne: 5 [Contest Prizes]
    Medusa: 3 [Contest Prizes]
    Little Tin Fish: 1 [Contest Prize]
    Jellybean: 1 [Contest Prize]

FM Tokens
    smorgishborg: 1 [Contest Prize]
    Gadi: 1 [Contest Prize]
    Suzanne: 2 [Contest Prizes]
    Medusa: 2 [Contest Prizes]
    Little Tin Fish: 1 [Contest Prize]
    Sam: 1 [Contest Prize]
    Kylan: 1 [Contest Prize]
    Jellybean: 1 [Contest Prize]


If I've promised you something or you already cashed in but it is not listed above, please PM me about it.

Ciao,
Cal.
Fraser: Stop stealing the blanket.
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Hatter: Do I need a reason to help a pretty girl in a very wet dress? (Alice)

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Tue Aug 19, 2008 5:45 pm
Caligula's Launderette says... · Tue Aug 19, 2008 5:45 pm
Proper Critiques Posted 8/19

    Kylan: We All Fall Down (Part 1 of 2), Suspensional Combustion
    Leja: [...] Ex-Dee #3
    whence: And Ariel smiled at me
    Firestarter: The Earth Was Rent And Torn
    Azila: Farewell, Penelope
    Gadi: May
    Jennafina: Benedict's Goodbye
    Medusa: Dawn with Fox
    Poor Imp: Vetren'iy, 1.1 - Rare Word, Refuge
Fraser: Stop stealing the blanket.
[Diefenbaker whines]
Fraser: You're an Arctic Wolf, for God's sake.
(Due South)

Hatter: Do I need a reason to help a pretty girl in a very wet dress? (Alice)

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