Maximum Ride: The New Breed

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Sorry, by left behind, I didn't mean left behind in the school...

I meant those who are having trouble flying away from the erasers.
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I tasted blood and that put me back into focus. I closed my eyes and concentrated. With a small glance behind me I saw that the Erasers had caught up with me. I beat my wings harder and started to pull slightly ahead.

I looked ahead and was stunned to see two of the new flock turn around. They were coming back? We’d spoken for like two seconds and they were risking their lives for me?

Straining my unused muscles, I flew harder and faster.
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**Ummm, I think he disappeared with the Erasers, I'm not sure. I know he's been mentioned. ****
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(Rose)

Rose stayed close to Colt, feeling she could trust him. Everyone soared around, dipping and dodging to avoid being hit. Above her ZT was protecting Mayze. Rose smirked childishly until she saw ZT was hurt. He, Colt, Lexy and a few others began flying back on their trail. They were glancing nervously looking for people to help.

Rose swivelled round reluctantly and gained height to join everyone. she drifted sideways and her wings collided into someone else's. She dropped suddenly then looked back to see who it was that she'd hit.

She didn't recognize who it was. A girl, older than her, with beautiful red wings was staring at her. Rose bit her lip and shouted an apology over the whistle of the wind. The girl smiled to show she'd heard then rose up to help Arro.

Rose started to slow down. Her small wings taking the strain of all this fast action. She dodged an object and screamed as it shot past her head. The Erasers were all jeering.

Everyone who was injured was now being escorted. Nate and blade checked to see where the erasers were and signalled for everybody to turn back on track, away from the school. Rose was tiring. Her wings beated uselessly. She looked around at everyone and gave a desperate groan. Rose kicked the air like a child struggling to swim. She began to hum made up tunes to herself to keep powering on.
Last edited by Blue Fairy on Fri Feb 22, 2008 8:09 pm, edited 1 time in total.
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(Lexy)

I thought I was going to throw up. I didn't know many of these people... and yet I trusted them with my life? Seriously? Ah, my wings hurt and so did my sholder the stupid white coats had dislocated it while trying to stick the needle in me. I tried my best to keep up... was all hope lost? Nah, we mine wasn't anyway.
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(ZT)

I looked at Lexy, she was hurt, and obviously not keeping up well. I dropped back until I was even with her, but I didn't know what I could do with an injured arm.
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[Arro]

She could see that ZT was trying to help, but his wound made it hard for him to do any real good.

'Here,' Arro grabbed Lexy's hand and pulled her up with the others.

ZT followed them up, always keeping a close eye on Mayze. 'Thanks, this arm is a bit...'

Arro smiled 'No problem!'

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Colt-

Colt flew up close to the others, "If anyone needs me to carry them I can." He offered, teh white coats had kept him in good shape, they tortered him none the less, but they kept him strong so they could try more painful and harmful torture. He inwardly growled, but keeping him in shape just made things worse cause they didn't keep his cage big enough for him.



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(Rose)

Rose flapped her wings harder to come level with Colt. Her cheeks had gone pink from the effort. She called out to Colt. He looked round at her as realised that she was struggling. Rose felt pathetic. she had never really had a chance before this to properly fly. The whitecoats hadn't bothered as much to build her strength.
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Colt-

Colt slowed down and grabbed Rose around the waist and shot up towards the others. "Hold onto my neck." He flapped harder and kept close to the others incase someone else fell. "YOu keep an eye on them. If someone falls behind let me know."
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(Rose)

Rose Relaxed and was extremely grateful that Colt was carrying her. She gazed down at the distant land below. The erasers had dissapeared from sight but in Roses opinion this made things scarier. Everyone seemed ok at the moment but as Colt had instructed she kept watch.

"We've have been in the air for ages," Rose moaned sleepily.
"We need a place to land," someone called out.
Rose hung onto Colt's neck tighter and tried to spot anything below. They were too high up to see any features of the land. Some people might have good enough eyesight to make out landmarks but Rose wasn't one of them. All she could see below was the fellow experiments that had escaped.


(When are we going to land?)
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