Maximum Ride: The New Breed

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I've always wanted to do a storybook like this! If I'm doing anything wrong, let me know!

Ok, Max, Fang, Iggy, Gazzy, Nudge and Angel are out there, being hunted by Erasers and the School. Meanwhile, back at the school, another breed of hybrids were being created. They were called the New Breed. They were all born in tubes, and grew up in cages. They were all engineered to fly, just like the orignal flock. Only this time, they were stronger, smarter, and faster.

This is where our story begins. The new flock will have to decide if they will try to escape from the School and live free, or if they will stay and help hunt down Max and the flock, and any others who try to escape.

So, here we go!

Name:

Age:

Characteristics:

Personality:

Side: (i.e. going to escape from the school or going to help find the escapees)

Special Traits: (i.e. Angel can read minds. Gazzy can speak like other people)

Have fun!

Rules:

No sex scenes.

Keep swearing to a minimum

No god moding

No killing off other players. Only they, themselves can kill them.

Have a blast!

Ready? Get set? Fly!

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Name: Nathaniel, perferably Nate

Age: 15

Characteristics: Blonde hair and purple eyes. His eyes are very special, as you'll see down there. Unsually tall and has a great sense of humor. Perfectly spotless white wings. 16 foot wingspan.

Personality: Would rather be a leader over a follower. Prefers Swiss over American cheese. Loves to joke, but is always determind. Hates the School and wants to set every mutant free.

Side: Going to escape

Special Traits: Purple eyes can sense into the near future, giving him a heads up. The only problem is, he can only use it once a day.


Get flying!
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No frikkin way...


WHOO!!! Party party party people *happy dance* oh I am soooo in! my charrie:

Name: Blade

Age: 15

Gender: female

Characteristics: tall and thin with long black-brown hair, sharp features, cutting blue eyes, muscular and proud of it, 14 foot wingspan, black wings with grey speckles

Personality: very headstrong, rebellious, sarcastic, energetic, likes a good fight

Side: Going to escape

Special Traits: EDIT: none now, i dropped mine because i kept forgetting i had it!
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thank you bigbad!!!!! im so physked for this!!
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Name- Sam

Age- 17

Gender- Male

Characteristics- Appearance- http://ellaine.deviantart.com/art/Witch ... n-30452587 His wings a a pure gray spanning 17 feet. His eyes are pitch black.

Personality- Cool and collective. He never smiles and never laughs. He speaks very emotionally and seems to be depressed most of the time. He will do what is necessary no matter what.

Side- Staying

Special Traits- Combat and tracking. He excelled above all of the others in this category.
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Name: Mayze (pron. maze)

Age: 14

Characteristics: Choppy brown hair that goes to her shoulders, blue eyes, short, lean, and sturdy, 13 foot wing span, white wings. http://i138.photobucket.com/albums/q272 ... 627_md.jpg

Personality: Mayze likes to joke around a lot. She was and still is the runt of the litter, so to say. She likes to lead people and has an innate talent for it. She's a bit like Max with less attitude.

Side: Escape!

Special Traits: Mayze can focus her eyes in three different ways. The first two are normal: focus in and focus out, everyone has those. Mayze can focus her eyes so she can see wind currents. They show up as little strands of gold in her vision. Because of third vision she is an excellent flier.
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Name: Lyssa

Age: 15

Characteristics: Black hair that she keeps short, bright green eyes, black wings flecked with white with a 14 ft wingspan. Not tall, but not exactly short

Personality: Lyssa is very bubbly, and hyper, and usually fidgets a lot. She can follow orders alright, but usually needs to be told several times. Has a very short attention span, and frequently spouts random nonsense.

Side: Very desperately wants to escape

Special Traits: She has very keen hearing, and can communicate with birds.

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Man, all this bird stuff feels weird. XD I kept wanting to make her a cat!
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*Yay! I love these books!*

Name: Arro

Age: 16

Characteristics: Normally (you will see why I say that) light brown hair wavy and bright blue eyes. She is tall for her age and slim. She has ice blue wings about a 13 feet wingspan.

Personality: Always puts others before herself, she is loyal but is wary of strangers. She is quick to retaliate but often regrets what she says.

Side: Staying because she is wary of the outside world

Special Traits: She is, effectively, a chameleon.

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Awesome! I think that we are ready to start!

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Nate:

"They've found her," I heard a whitecoat say. "They found Max." There was a sense of triumph in his voice.

"Ha! Serve her right. After what she did to Inex. Where are they taking her?" another whitecoat asked. I bit my lip, trying to hold in my anger. They were always trying to capture Max. At least, that's what I know.

"They're taking her back here. Morrington said that they found the whole flock exept Angel," the first whitecoat replied.

"Isn't she the youngest?"

"Yeah..."

I shook my head and walked away from the door. I was walking through a hallway of the School when I heard these two whitecoats talking about Max.

I am one of the very few that are trusted out of the cages. I don't find myself any more special than the others. They are just like me... different.

And one day, I was going to help those kids escape.

And one day, I was going to unfurl my wings and fly. For the first time.
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[Blade]

The whitecoats were all buzzing with the news, they had found Max! Blade could feel the triumph and pride that illuminated from them, the idiots. She clenched her fist angrily, hoping that Max would be able to escape, as usual.

She shifted her position in the dog crate, a large Kanine Kamper. Through the bars in the front, she could see whitecoats scurrying here and there, frantically looking for paperwork on experiments. If she scrunched herself against the side of the crate, she could see another couple of crates. They all had experiments caged inside. She had never met another experiment personally, only seen some who were able to walk around.

Carefully, she massaged her latest bruise. A whitecoat had clubbed her against the side of her head when she had refused to cooperate.

Anger bubbled up inside her and she felt the familiar urge to escape. She would, someday...




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Arro shuffled quickly to the back of her cage. Someone was coming.

She looked up through the bars and prayed silently it wasn't someone coming for her. The footsteps came ever closer and she clenched her fists retreating as far back as possible.

A boy appeared, his wings indicated she was safe. She breathed a sigh of relief. 'I thought you were one of the whitecoats.'

He gave a half smile and his face looked grave. 'They've caught Max.'

Arro frowned. 'Well let's hope she gets away again. Who knows what they would do to her otherwise.'

'Did they get the others too?'

'All but Angel.'

Arro shuffled forwards and stuck a hand through the bars. 'I'm Arro. Who are you?'

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Nate:

"I'm Nate," I greeted. "How are you doing today?"

Arro looked around her small cage and said, "How does it look like?" I smiled softly.

"I'm sorry about all this," I started, but Arro stopped him.

"Why are you sorry? It's not your fault..."

"We're going to get out of here, ok? I'm going to escape. And I want everyone to come with me. We need to help Max and the flock escape also."

Arro leaned back in her cage and shook her head.

"I don't want to leave. You don't know what's... out there!"

I was taken aback. Why would she not want to leave? I thought that it was everyone's dream to escape from these tiny cells...
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Name: Colt

Age: 17

Characteristics: http://plnunn.deviantart.com/art/Sexy-W ... oy-2161154 (Ignore what they named it, twas the only winged person i could find that looked old enough)

Eyes: http://donia.deviantart.com/art/Sparkling-Eye-9277947

Personality: Quiet, he doesn't have to be in charge, but usually is because he is so protective of people. He doesn't like to be mean but he can.

Side: Escape

Special Traits: He has 'spider sense' aka quick reflexs. I don't really know how to explain it other hten like what spiderman has. He can't climb up walls or shoot out webs though. :D.
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[Arro]

Arro glanced up at Nate and sighed. 'Personally I would rather help Max escape than escape myself. I mean, they need to more than I do.'

Nate looked at her in a strange kind of disbelief and awe. 'Well, I suppose, if you look at it that way...'

'I do.' Arro nodded her head firmly. 'So, what can you do?'

Nate looked slightly taken aback. 'Um, what do you mean?'

'Well,' Arro shrugged, 'I can do this.' she melted into the background.

'Where did you go? Are you invisible?'

'No.' she said returning to normal. 'It's more like a chameleon blends into the background. If you knew what to look for, you would see me.'

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Nate:

"Heh," I smiled. Then I shook my head. "I'd show you, but I'd only be able to do it one time a day... it really sucks."

"What can you do?" Arro asked, raising her eyebrow.

"I can see into the future. Just a little bit though. It's my purple eyes. The whitecoats screwed up my eyes and now I can see into the future. But I can only use it one time a day. I sucks."

"Well," Arro said, "show me anyway! I mean, you're not going to need it today, right?"

"Well, what if something were to happen and I need to see what the outcome would be?" I asked. She was getting my nerves...

"Just do it. Please?"

I sighed and nodded my head. "Fine..."

I closed my eyes and concentrated. Soon, the world around me disapeared and I found myself an hour into the future.

A whitecoat walked past me. He didn't see me, because I wasn't there.

Nothing was going to happen.

I sighed, until I heard people running. I quickly glanced to where the sound was coming from, and gasped.

"Get - the - freak - away -from - me!" a girl yelled. In an instant, I knew that it was Max. Max was here! They had captured her and brought her here!

I needed to warn the others so we could escape!
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[Arro]

Nate went slightly cross-eyed for a moment and Arro watched with intrest.

Suddenly his eyes came back into focus and he said something so fast she couldn't understand him.

'What?'

'Max! She's here! They brought her here!'

Arro looked back at him, stunned.

'What can we do? If I could get out of this cage I could go chameleon and let out as many as possible to go and help Max. Are the others here as well?'

'I don't know, I only saw Max.'

Arro rattled the bars, 'Can you get me out of here?'

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[Lyssa]

I opened my eyes, and blinked wearily. Voices had woken me, and I instinctively cringed and pushed myself to the back of the dog crate. I stopped breathing for a second, and could instantly tell that these weren't White Coats. Thank God!

I rapped lightly on the side of the crate, trying to catch their attention.

"Hey, who's there?" I whispered loudly. The voices stopped, but then I heard a girl's voice say quietly, "Don't worry, it's just Lyssa."

I rocked back and forth, and tapped the side of the crate with my fingers. "What are you guys whispering about?"
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