The Random Vampire Story [1]

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Colt-


"don't waste your life on me." Her words rang in his mind for a second before the deep voice came back on.

"She isn't to smart." The man hissed,

"Where do I meet you?" Colt demanded, no way was he about to let Caiden slip through his fingers and have to live with her death the rest of his life. The rest of eternity.

"Thats a good vampire." The voice laughed, "In the woods behind her house is a werewolf. If ANY harm comes to her I'll kill you and your girl. She'll bring you here." The man hung up and Colt smiled. The stupid werewolf had left him a bargianing chip. This girl was worth somethign to the were and Caiden was worth everythign to Colt.

Colt did as the vampire said and soon met up with the girl. Slade and Brent in tow.
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Brent was petrified, he wanted to help Caiden, he could tell how much she meant to Colt and she was a good friend of his as well. But Colt was a vampire and Slade was a wizard, he was just a human. A human packing three guns and two daggers he reminded himself to stay calm.

They reached Caiden's house and started looking for the girl. But strangely all they found was her corpse.
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Colt-

Colt stared at the girl, she couldn't be dead. She was his link to Caiden. He walked over and felt for a pulse. He didn't need to, he didn't smell any life in her. He chocked back the sob that threatened to tear out of his throat. Colt looked at his phone. Maybe Caiden had hers. He dialed the number and waited.

"WHAT?" the voice demanded,

"Um, someone beat us here." He muttered just barely in a whisper.

"WHAT! What happened to Alina?" The voice demanded,

"If I knew do you think I would've called you, she's here, but..." Colt couldn't say it,

"She's dead, well good going..."

"YOU LISTEN TO ME! I DIDN'T DO THIS!" Colt yelled, he took a deep breath. "Whoever else knew she was here did this. I want Caiden back do you think I would hurt my link to her?"
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Whoever was holding her phone snapped it shut and walked over to Caiden, "it seems your little friends have fowled up."

She spit in his face, "good."

She closed her eyes and blocked out the intense pain in her side. "He will hear your screams," the werewolf assured her, "you've yet to feel the sun's burning rays."

That scared her.

She was dragged to a room and chained to the wall. The werewolves went over to a heavily blinded window and pulled one of the blinds back. The sun's diminished intensity still burned her and she was sure that where ever Colt was, he could hear her screaming.
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Colt looked around for any hint of where they were supposed to go when a deafining scream filled his ears.

"Caiden." He barely whispered her name before he took off towards the sound. They would die, they would all die for this. He picked up speed leaving the other two behind his hand when to the daggers in his pocket and he pulled it away. He stuck his hand in his jacket pocket and pulled out finger knives. They fit like rings and had knives coming out of them looking kinda like Wolverines hands. He sniffed the air, he was getting closer and he was going to kill someone if her screaming didn't cease, but if ceasing meant she died they would die the most painful death he could ever think of.
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After a while they closed the blinds and Caiden stopped screaming, "I think he heard enough," one said, "put her in the box."

Caiden felt a flood of horror washing over her, what box? She was ready to fight off the werewolves as soon as they uncuffed her. But when she tried, nothing happened, she collapsed into the werewolf spent and unable to move. He carried her to the back yard, where she could see a hole in the ground and a sob of terror got caught in her throat. Is that what they meant by box?

She screamed again, got kicked in the leg, causing her to scream more. They threw her into the box and put the lid on top. She fought to push it up and off before they could cover it with dirt, but any of her stregnth failed her, she screamed more.
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The screams stopped but Colt could smell the werewolves now. He tore through the door slashing one of the guards throats. He was blind with rage now and anyone that got in his way was as good as dead. Running faster then he ever had he tore through the house destroying everything and anything in site. He yanked one of the werewolves up against the wall.

"Where is she?" He demanded,

"I-I-I don't know." The wolf stuttered in human form.

"Don't play games, I'll make your death slow and painful unless you tell me where she is." Colt hissed,

"T-the box." The wolf groaned,

"Where is it?" Colt demanded,

"O-outside," It's eyes slowly glazed over as it passed out and Colt tore outside. There wasn't a box anywhere though. He could smell Caiden, but he couldn't figure out where she was.

"CAIDEN!" He yelled, "where are you?"
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Caiden thought she could hear Colt's voice calling her name, but she knew she was imagining things, he wouldn't come save her would he? He was angry with her.

"CAIDEN! Where are you?"

A feirce hunger pain tore through her so feirce that she screamed, a very quiet and hoarse sound, but it still rang out through the day.
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Colt heard the yell. It was coming from below him. He looked around and found some upturned dirt and started digging. He found a box like thing and tore the lid off.

"Caiden!" He yanked her out and pulled her close to him any anger he felt for her gone. "Your alive." he breathed, he breathed in deeply locking her smell away in his mind. "I'm so sorry."
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Caiden could barely believe it when Colt pulled her out of the box and tight into his arms. He really had come looking for her. She wrapped her arms around him and started sobbing helpless broken sobs.

"Shh, its okay, its okay. I'm here, I won't let them get you again."

Caiden clung to him, afraid that he would vanish. She ignored the pain of the searing in her skin at every point of contact and the gut wrenching hunger that tore through her. She felt as though she would faint soon.
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Colt held Caiden out at arms length. "Whats wrong?" he demanded looking into her eyes, they were full of pain, and something else. Hunger maybe, he couldnt' tell. He carried her out of the sun and set her down looking her face over. "What did they do to you?"
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Caiden shuddered and pressed herself to him, "they burned me," she whispered, it hurt so much, I could barely breathe, and they attacked me, hit and kicked and pulled, and then they buried me in that box." She pulled back enough to look at his face, "nothing frightens me more than being buried alive."

He pulled her tighter to him still and she began to sob again. Still ignoring the hunger. "How hungry are you?" he asked.

"It hurts," was all she could manage at the moment. "It feels like I'm dying."

The stiffening of his body and the way his breath caught made her realize something, she was dying. She managed to get herself into a seated position. Dots danced in front of her eyes and everything went black.
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Colt-

Colt picked Caiden up and ran back to his apartment. Brenty and Slade had gone back when he left them in the dust and waited. They had all the vampires kept in the house, but didn't let on that they knew what had happened. Colt set Caiden down on the couch and felt for a pulse, well at least what he could ffeel for a vampire. It was fading fast. He quickly bit his wrist and put it to her lips.

"Please, please drink, I can't lose you." he cooed in her ear hoping she could hear him and would respond.
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Caiden woke some time later in a pitch black room. Instantly her fear returned and she reached out to hit the wall but instead found something soft.

"Hello," Colt's voice said quietly and omniously, "how do you feel?"

"Where am I?"

"Home. How do you feel?"

"In pain," she said, "my chest feels like a pole was just pulled out of it. What happened? Last thing I remember is being thrown into a box underground." she shuddered at the memory.
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"I got you home, we need to go find you some food. Your still weak." Colt said running his hand through her hair. "Do you think you could do it?"

"What happened to the werewolves?" She demanded.

"They wont mess with us anymore. You didn't answer my question." he smiled down at her,
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