The Random Vampire Story [1]

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"Good idea," He turned to the others, "let's get to her place, we'll make up a plan there. I'm not about to leave my apartment to them." He wrapped his arms around Caiden as they started towards her house. He loved teh feel of her in his hands, the way her hair felt against his skin and her skin on his.
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Caiden walked alongside Colt. How had she gone through life without having known him before? The very thought seemed impossible to comprehend now. "I love you," she murmered into his chest.
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"I love you too." He replied breathing in her scent. They walked into her house and his nose flared, someoen was there, someone who smelled bitter and mean. He pulled Caiden close and looked around. Who was there, who had invaded her home, her safety. He would destroy them, they meant them no good and that was for sure from their smell.
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"Caiden!"

Caiden's undead heart skipped a beat, no he couldn't be here, could he?

"Nick?"

"Who's Nick?" Colt asked.

"My old boss."

"Oy Caiden! There's a vampire near by!"

"Yeah," she said, "two of them, and I'm one of them."

He rounded a corner and came face to face with them, "what?"
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Colt-

Colt looked at the guy in front of him. He wasn't but maybe Colt's age, well the age he looked. He wrapped his arm around Caiden glaring at the guy. Caiden didn't seem worried in the least bit, but Colt didn't want someone that paid people to hunt vampires around Caiden, not even in the same town.
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"You're a vampire?" Nick asked.

"Yeah..." she said looking down a little bit, she didn't mind being a vampire but her boss was ticked.

"So I guess this means you quit?"

"Yup."

"Pity," he said looking at her, "a hunter as good as you shoulda had the sense to fall on a knife when she was turned."

"I guess I wasn't that good," she said starting to grow a little upset herself.
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"EXCUSE ME!" Colt nearly boomed, "She should've done nothing of the sort." He growled at the guy. He was ready to kill him for saying such a thing.
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Caiden gently put her hand on Colt's arm, trying to calm him down.

"Nick," she said, "I'm not going to kill myself for what I've become."

His glare bore holes in her skull, "you should."

Caiden glared back, "but I won't."

"Then I'll have to kill you both."
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Colt let his teeth slid out of his gums and he glared at the guy.

"Please, do try." He hissed his hand sliding to the gun that was still attached to his side.

**I couldn't think of much. :'(**
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Caiden knew what Nick was going to do, and knew how to one up him, as soon as he looked away when his gun got caught on his belt she kicked his feet out from under him. Sending him hard onto the ground.

"Watch yourself Nick," she said stepping on the hand that was holding the gun, and taking it away, "I know how foolish you are when it comes to vampire hunting." She let her fangs slide down, "if you come here again, you'll see the full extent to my new powers."
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Colt-

Colt looked down at the guy sprawled on the ground. "You come here again you'll be dead." he hissed,
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Caiden stood up and pulled Nick up and shoved him out the door. "You know me well enough to know that I'm not lying when I say that we will kill you."

"Just watch yourself Caiden," Nick warned, "I won't be put away so easily."

"Don't worry," Caiden glowered, "if you come back you won't feel the pain...much."
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Colt-

Colt stood behind Caiden watching the guy walk away glaring holes into his back.

"I can't believe you knew that guy, he's....strange." He said wrapping his arms around her shoulders.
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Caiden shrugged slightly and leaned into Colt, "he was my boss. Of course he's strange."

"Do you think he'll be back?"

"Yeah. With some help."

Colt growled.
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"Just what we need, more trouble makers. We will need to get rid of the others before we have to worry about theses guys getting down out throats." Colt growled leading her into the house and closing the door behind him.
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