Basically, choose a work from the person above you and critique it. Then put the title and link of the story/poem/thingy you critiqued on this thread. Then somebody gets to critique your work, and so on! ^_^
Ubi caritas est vera, Deus ibi est.
"The mark of your ignorance is the depth of your belief in injustice and tragedy. What the caterpillar calls the end of the world, the Master calls the butterfly." ~ Richard Bach
"2-4-6-8! I like to delegate!" -Meshugenah "Teague: Stomping on your dreams since 1992." -Sachiko "So I'm looking at FLT and am reminded of a sandwich." -Jabber
Come on, it can't just be Adam and I going back and forth!
"2-4-6-8! I like to delegate!" -Meshugenah "Teague: Stomping on your dreams since 1992." -Sachiko "So I'm looking at FLT and am reminded of a sandwich." -Jabber
"2-4-6-8! I like to delegate!" -Meshugenah "Teague: Stomping on your dreams since 1992." -Sachiko "So I'm looking at FLT and am reminded of a sandwich." -Jabber
"2-4-6-8! I like to delegate!" -Meshugenah "Teague: Stomping on your dreams since 1992." -Sachiko "So I'm looking at FLT and am reminded of a sandwich." -Jabber
Aw, come on! I made this review... and then Razor steals my spot. Well, I need to review more anyway, so I'll do Razor too. post255477.html This is my review, anyway. YWS Highwind.
man hands on misery to man it deepens like a coastal shelf get out as early as you can and don’t have any kids yourself.
Sorry if it seems rather brief. I can't really think of much for poems and every one else had already taken most of the things to be said. It was very good though, in my opinion. My crit came to me easily after reading it.
P.S. how do you do that with the title melded with the url?
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post255477.html This is my review, anyway. YWS Highwind.
