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deleted6
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Sun Nov 25, 2007 5:12 pm
deleted6 says... · Sun Nov 25, 2007 5:12 pm
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Midnight Darkness #2

Promising... :).
We get off to the rhythm of the trigger and destruction. Fallujah to New Orleans with impunity to kill. We are the hidden fist of the free market.
We are the ink, we are the quill.
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Gadi.
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Sat Dec 01, 2007 7:08 pm
Gadi. says... · Sat Dec 01, 2007 7:08 pm
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my world isn't only beautiful
it is so far away
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Gadi.
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Mon Dec 03, 2007 11:30 pm
Gadi. says... · Mon Dec 03, 2007 11:30 pm
:( Somebody?
my world isn't only beautiful
it is so far away
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smorgishborg
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Mon Dec 03, 2007 11:55 pm
smorgishborg says... · Mon Dec 03, 2007 11:55 pm
Blue Manhattan :D
The woods are lovely, dark and deep.
But I have promises to keep,
And miles to go before I sleep,
And miles to go before I sleep.
- Robert Frost

It cost $7 million to build the Titanic, and $200 million to make a film about it.
The plastic ties on the end of shoelaces are called aglets
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Snoink
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Tue Dec 04, 2007 8:01 am
Snoink says... · Tue Dec 04, 2007 8:01 am
What a Waste - Poem
Ubi caritas est vera, Deus ibi est.

"The mark of your ignorance is the depth of your belief in injustice and tragedy. What the caterpillar calls the end of the world, the Master calls the butterfly." ~ Richard Bach

Moth and Myth <- My comic! :D
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Gadi.
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Wed Dec 05, 2007 5:42 am
Gadi. says... · Wed Dec 05, 2007 5:42 am
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my world isn't only beautiful
it is so far away
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smorgishborg
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Wed Dec 05, 2007 8:42 pm
smorgishborg says... · Wed Dec 05, 2007 8:42 pm
On A Silver Platter
The woods are lovely, dark and deep.
But I have promises to keep,
And miles to go before I sleep,
And miles to go before I sleep.
- Robert Frost

It cost $7 million to build the Titanic, and $200 million to make a film about it.
The plastic ties on the end of shoelaces are called aglets
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onceuponatim3xo
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Wed Dec 05, 2007 9:59 pm
onceuponatim3xo says... · Wed Dec 05, 2007 9:59 pm
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It is better to travel well than to arrive.
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Gadi.
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Wed Dec 12, 2007 7:58 pm
Gadi. says... · Wed Dec 12, 2007 7:58 pm
The Elements
my world isn't only beautiful
it is so far away
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Gadi.
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Mon Dec 17, 2007 3:13 pm
Gadi. says... · Mon Dec 17, 2007 3:13 pm
Oh, common! Don't let this die :( !
my world isn't only beautiful
it is so far away
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Icaruss
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Tue Dec 18, 2007 1:04 am
Icaruss says... · Tue Dec 18, 2007 1:04 am
Stop bumping this. This thread never dies. Doesn't need help, really. Just some guy who's not getting critiques on their latest post. Here you go!

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scotty.knows
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Wed Dec 19, 2007 5:17 am
scotty.knows says... · Wed Dec 19, 2007 5:17 am
Okay, I got one of Icaruss'.

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http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic17372.html

Will someone please tell me how to make links look neat and tidy instead of like the mess above? Please?
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Kylan
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Thu Dec 20, 2007 12:33 am
Kylan says... · Thu Dec 20, 2007 12:33 am
IT'S YOUR FAULT

Nice, Scotty. I'm surprised it didn't recieve more attention.

-Kylan
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and can see only two choices:
either go crazy or turn holy."

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smorgishborg
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Thu Dec 20, 2007 1:18 am
smorgishborg says... · Thu Dec 20, 2007 1:18 am
Führer

Kylan, I apologize, I've been to busy to tackle the second "Honor" portion. Bear with me, I should get it done no later then Friday.

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URL CODE IS EASY
[url=ADRESS OF POST]NAME[/url]

ex (with spaces): [ url=http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic23338.html ] Führer [ /url ]
The woods are lovely, dark and deep.
But I have promises to keep,
And miles to go before I sleep,
And miles to go before I sleep.
- Robert Frost

It cost $7 million to build the Titanic, and $200 million to make a film about it.
The plastic ties on the end of shoelaces are called aglets
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Acoustic Sensitivity
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Sun Dec 30, 2007 4:05 pm
Acoustic Sensitivity says... · Sun Dec 30, 2007 4:05 pm
Who Killed Lord Potemkin?

Hope you like my works.
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