Critique the Person Above You!

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Jasmine Hart
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Thu Oct 25, 2007 8:50 pm
Jasmine Hart says... · Thu Oct 25, 2007 8:50 pm
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"Just like moons and like suns,
With the certainty of tides,
Just like hopes springing high,
Still I'll rise."
-Maya Angelou
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Teague
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Thu Oct 25, 2007 10:06 pm
Teague says... · Thu Oct 25, 2007 10:06 pm
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BigBadBear
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Sat Oct 27, 2007 8:13 pm
BigBadBear says... · Sat Oct 27, 2007 8:13 pm
http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/post259209.html#259209

Good Job, Razor!
Just write -- the rest of life will follow.

Would love help on this.
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Icaruss
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Sun Oct 28, 2007 11:47 pm
Icaruss says... · Sun Oct 28, 2007 11:47 pm
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there are many problems in our times
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Mon Oct 29, 2007 2:26 am
smorgishborg says... · Mon Oct 29, 2007 2:26 am
Untitled
The woods are lovely, dark and deep.
But I have promises to keep,
And miles to go before I sleep,
And miles to go before I sleep.
- Robert Frost

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Gadi.
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Mon Oct 29, 2007 2:47 am
Gadi. says... · Mon Oct 29, 2007 2:47 am
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Amazing.
my world isn't only beautiful
it is so far away
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Tue Oct 30, 2007 2:01 pm
Alteran says... · Tue Oct 30, 2007 2:01 pm
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BigBadBear
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Wed Oct 31, 2007 9:57 pm
BigBadBear says... · Wed Oct 31, 2007 9:57 pm
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Good job!
Just write -- the rest of life will follow.

Would love help on this.
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just_intoxicated03
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Fri Nov 02, 2007 2:45 am
just_intoxicated03 says... · Fri Nov 02, 2007 2:45 am
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this piece made my brain bleed. :D
Oh, Lisa, you and your stories: Bart's a vampire, beer kills brain cells. Now let's go back to that... building... thingie... where our beds and TV... is. --Homer Simpson
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Icaruss
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Fri Nov 02, 2007 4:23 am
Icaruss says... · Fri Nov 02, 2007 4:23 am
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Good one.
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onceuponatim3xo
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Sat Nov 10, 2007 4:44 pm
onceuponatim3xo says... · Sat Nov 10, 2007 4:44 pm
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Rydia
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Sat Nov 10, 2007 5:54 pm
Rydia says... · Sat Nov 10, 2007 5:54 pm
Onceuponatime, the idea is to critique a piece of work by the person above you and then post the link. Instead you seem to have given a very short critique on the same piece as the person above you and posted a link to your own story...

Tell you what, I'll do one for each. Give me a moment...

Smorg - post264698.html#264698

Onceuponatime - post264707.html#264707
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Gadi.
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Sat Nov 10, 2007 6:09 pm
Gadi. says... · Sat Nov 10, 2007 6:09 pm
:D Well, I hope I am doing this right then...

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