Critique the Person Above You!

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It good! Could be a bit longer though... I'll review in a sec... Also, the link thing is done like so. [ur l=yayness]Yayness.[/url] only no space between r and l and replace the first "yayness" with your link and the second with your text.

EDIT: Or maybe I won't... I'm suddenly exhausted... if you all want to wait for me to not be exhausted, do so, or just carry on without moi.
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There ya go, Fantasyartist
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Light of Death

Now crit me, baby, crit me!

...'nother bad pun. *sits in corner again*
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Fingers


...Oy, pickpockets. ^_^








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Sans Soleil (short)

There you go.

Crit me baby, one more time.

Uh oh, my addiction to horrible puns is so bad I'm doing a Spears one! *jumps off cliff*
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But really, someone crit moi.
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get out as early as you can
and don’t have any kids yourself.

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Noes! Don't let an awesome topic like this fail so soon!
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Fingers
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Oy, I hit Adam -- Temporal


But I suppose Reakeda dodged in ahead of me. ^_^'' I'll try to crit her as well then...








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]Midst of Chaos, Prologue






^_^






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Finding something of yours, Imp, that a stack of adoring fans havn't already crit to death is teribble difficult. ^.^


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