Critique the Person Above You!

Writing Gooder

~Previously KittyKatSparklesExplosion15~

The light shines brightest in the darkest places.

my world isn't only beautiful
it is so far away

my world isn't only beautiful
it is so far away

"Just like moons and like suns,
With the certainty of tides,
Just like hopes springing high,
Still I'll rise."
-Maya Angelou

"Son, what do you want to be when you grow up?"
"A felon!"
"Are you sure?"
"Yah! This kid at school says they get all the girls!"
"I should try that..."

"Son, what do you want to be when you grow up?"
"A felon!"
"Are you sure?"
"Yah! This kid at school says they get all the girls!"
"I should try that..."

there are many problems in our times
but none of them are mine

Got YWS?

"Most of us have far more courage than we ever dreamed we possessed."
- Dale Carnegie

my world isn't only beautiful
it is so far away

Just write -- the rest of life will follow.

Would love help on this.

man hands on misery to man
it deepens like a coastal shelf
get out as early as you can
and don’t have any kids yourself.

Legacy signature:
dun worry
it's all gun be k

Just write -- the rest of life will follow.

Would love help on this.

man hands on misery to man
it deepens like a coastal shelf
get out as early as you can
and don’t have any kids yourself.

Legacy signature:
dun worry
it's all gun be k

"Just like moons and like suns,
With the certainty of tides,
Just like hopes springing high,
Still I'll rise."
-Maya Angelou

Just write -- the rest of life will follow.

Would love help on this.