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Horror/Thriller with lots of violence and mytery. I don't know wether i would read it or not, depends on the cover art.

How could they?
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A normal girl has some problems she blows way out of preportion, nobody likes her and she's an outcast. I might look at the cover.

Those Nights
But that is not the question. Why we are here, that is the question. And we are blessed in this, that we happen to know the answer. Yes, in this immense confusion one thing alone is clear. We are waiting for Godot to come. -Beckett




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Reminds of something to do with rememberance. Two people meet, have a fling, then part ways for a few years until once more they meet, adn develope a love for one another. Not one for romance stories so probably wouldn't read but I'd recommend it to friends who read that sort of stuff.

The Sorceror's Descendant




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Oh, I think of The Sorcerer's Stone at first, although I don't read HP, and you've misspelled sorcerer. Sounds like some fantasy piece...Descendant...an heir. Someone realizes their an heir to something, and blah blah, life changes, yes?

Black Water
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― Alexandre Dumas, The Count of Monte Cristo




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Sounds like a mysteryish thing about a girl who was murdered and found in water. Of course the whole thing about it being a memoir makes it better. I would pick it up...but that could be because I already know what it's about...lol

Those Nights: We weren't in Love
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Definitely some kind of romance, but a very dramatic and heartbreaking one? I'm not sure, but it sounds like soemthing that would surely fall into some kind of romantic sub-genre.

White Dress




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A story about unrequited love. :roll: It makes me think of a wedding; it ends in tears, or doesn't even begin, with the groom running off, and the bride doing a Miss Haversham impression for the rest of her life. Not my kind of thing.

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a prodigal son type story. about a girl or a guy who screws up his life and then finds that some girl or guy from their childhood was the one they truly loved... lol i don't know.


Smell the Color Blue
"I can't stand him. His ego is splattered all over that screen and it's making me nauseous."
~Me referring to Ashton Kutcher.

"I think the dragon should eat him."
~My boyfriend referring to Eragon




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Reminds me of the movie Hudson Hawk, but thats "What does the color blue taste like?"


Booglefetchness!!! Yeah thats right, I said it!
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Hmm....I'm not sure what to say. Would catch my eye, I guess, before I exclaimed "WTF?" XD

Quiet Winter




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Hmm. Sounds like something on the dramatic side, but slow-moving and subtle that really hits you with a punch at the end. Something to do with snow, LOL.

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Hmm...not sure, really. I don't really get any image from it, and I can't tell whether or not it's in a foreign language. *Ponders* I would probably flip through it at a bookstore, just to figure out the title.

Silver Lining


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Sounds like a true life story about a little girl. All abuse and terrible stuff that she finds her way out of in the end.

Hidden Angel
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A story about a disabled girl who finds that she has a talent that wows everyone who meets her.


Butterfly Kiss
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Sounds very YA, something about boyfriend drama. Or a boyfriend from another world, a là Twilight.

Peas Porridge
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