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There's a book- Burned- that I read, and it was about Mormons and sex. Probably not the image you would want with a new book...I'd pick something similar, but not quite, "Oh! That reminds me of ___."

Hanged Until Dead
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I honestly have to say it- isn't the "until dead" part a bit obvious? I mean, can you hang someone until they're almost dead?

And because I'm a stubborn goat, I wouldn't pick it up for that very reason. Sorry. xD

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Feels like an adventure story, sort of like Odyssey, or maybe something about waiting for someone for Ten Years, Twenty Eight Days.

I wouldn't really pick it up, I think.

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i have no idea what to think about that. it's so random i might pick it up.

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I'm not sure what I think of the two things together. I immidiatly think of some fantasy novel which has the elements as powers, the main character with fire...I wouldn't pick it up. Or a story about an arsonist, or a pyromaniac, if it was one of those I'd be more likely to pick it up. I'm not sure I like the title a lot....

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Um something about either a serial killer or the death penalty. Possibly set in the future.

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Claudette wrote:I'm not sure what I think of the two things together. I immidiatly think of some fantasy novel which has the elements as powers, the main character with fire...I wouldn't pick it up.


:shock: you are psychic. that was a title i was considering for my story, and that's the basic plot. creepy

as to your title, write me, it makes me think of a teen novel about a girl who breaks all those unspoken rules of high school. i'd pick it up cuz it might make me laugh.


Jennifer's Journal
“We’re still here,” he says, his voice cold, his hands shaking. “We know how to be invisible, how to play dead. But at the end of the day, we are still here.” ~Dax

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A journal from a girl named Jennifer...pretty selfexplanitory. Sounds boring and is cliche'. Wouldn't pick it up. Needs a more creative title.

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hmm...something about fishing.


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The title makes me think of phoenix for some reason. Maybe the story is about someone entering into some sort of group and getting branded. Then they get some mystical pyrokinetic ability. I'd read it.

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Hm... I don't know. Doesn't strike me as the type of book I would pick up, somehow. Is it about some manical race with time?


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a love story, diffinitely with a female main charactor.

here goes then:

A Blue-Blooded's Quest
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Interesting... I think I would first ask, "What/who is a blue-blooded being?" then I would wonder what his quest is. Kind of intereting, though "quest stories" are a tad cliche.

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Of course I love it, Tillychan, because it's in English. ^_~

It's very stark- you get the feeling of death, without clichè. I quite like it.

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For some reason I think of a race horse? Which is a very odd thing to think of no matter what is going on.... #_# So I suppose I do not like it.

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