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Murder mystery. All they find is the feet.



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Makes me think of something like a feel good, teenage girl, read over the summer kind of book...not my style...I would probably just browse past it...

(Keeping in with the Silver theme)

Silver Night
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Some fantasy or horror story connected with the full moon. Werewolves, or barn owls. I'd pick it up to read the back and look at the cover art.

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Makes me think of 'Lady D'Arbanville' - a nice title, gives me the impression of a type of archaic romantic tragedy. Or perhaps I've been reading too much Camille. But I would pick it up, in any event. ^_^




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Set somewhere sunny and sephia, where the flowers are always in bloom and the trees are always green. I think I'd read it.




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Title? Maybe?

A Slight of Perception
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Kind of action/thrillery. I'd probably pick it up, because for some odd reason, I adore the word perception.

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Sounds like a beautifully refreshing drama thing, I would definitely pick it up and give a look through. It sounds so subtly profound, so I would probably burst unless I at least read the first chapter to see what in the world it could be about.

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I'd say something about abarishment. um, yeah I'll go with that.

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EEww, that looks like something really cliche!


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Not sure it really works as a title, it seems like a thought, and not really profound enough to be a really catchy title. Maybe it's just mel. XD

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If I didn't already know what it was about...^_~ Sounds a bit like a memoir of a person in a plane crash in a mountains, or a romance. [Sorry that they're conflicting- but hey, it's what I thought.]

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it just sounds dumb


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Ooer, subtlety. :wink: I think it's a bit long for a title, myself- but if I had to guess, it'd probably be a YA. About a geeky English freak struggling to be cool.

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a girl who doesn't fit in in a preppy rich snob school.


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