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For some strange reason this title reminds me of a nursery rhyme. Or a jump rope chant or something like that. But I think such a story would be about children definately, and perhaps Oliver Twist-ish. Maybe satiric? I'd read it anyway...

Honor
"I am beginning to despair
and can see only two choices:
either go crazy or turn holy."

- Serenade, Adélia Prado




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Sounds like a war-story to me. Something about being in the heat of war, and how it changes you and all that? Sounds interesting, at any rate.


A Winter Memory


MM




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definitely a memoir. like Sarah Plain and Tall or something.

Deathbed
"I can't stand him. His ego is splattered all over that screen and it's making me nauseous."
~Me referring to Ashton Kutcher.

"I think the dragon should eat him."
~My boyfriend referring to Eragon




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It sounds kind of morbid, but interesting.

Crossing Worlds

It's just a vauge idea of what the series I'm working on might be named. It's actually more of a working title. I'm not really sure if I like it though.
"Don't worry, you're just as sane as I am..."




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Sounds like a story about parallel dimensions or someone making a life-changing decision.

Flyboy




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The main character is probably really cocky and suave. A cool guy- possibly a pilot?

Breathing Lessons
Graffiti is the most passionate form of literature there is.

- Demetri Martin




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Seems like a book about someone who is missing the basic things of life (liek breathing) and goes on a 'quest' of fulfillment.

Black Mancer Investigations




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Hmmm....A film noir sort of book, old fashioned detective story.

[i]Been and gone[/i]
Stop. Look. Jive!




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I'm not entirely sure what I think of it. It didn't help that when I saw it I said "bean" rather than "bin" (phonetically, that is). It doesn't tell me a whole lot about the story, so I'm not sure what to expect.

Death Machine
“It's necessary to have wished for death in order to know how good it is to live.”
― Alexandre Dumas, The Count of Monte Cristo




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For some reason it makes me think of dirty politicians.

Unstoppable




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Sounds like a Hallmark movie about some sports champion with cancer. It's OK.

"Brotherly Arms."
there are many problems in our times
but none of them are mine




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Sounds like a drama story with two brothers who have never met but find out about each other. They then go on a guest to find each other and it spirals out of control...

Sorry, i got carried away. I would propably read it. :D

Reciets and Tomatos
Come to the dark side. We have cookies!




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Ah, I like the receipts thing...tomatoes might be a little too random? It's not an entirely whacky combination, though, so you might have to have a pretty flashy cover for me to pick it up. ^_~

Pretty Little Rags and Bones

Similar, auf Deutsch: Lumpen und Knochen
Graffiti is the most passionate form of literature there is.

- Demetri Martin




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It's too long and cluncky for me (the English, that is) "pretty little rags" or "pretty little bones" would work but the "Rags and Bones" just fills it out too much. As to the German? It's German! I like it.

Death Machine
“It's necessary to have wished for death in order to know how good it is to live.”
― Alexandre Dumas, The Count of Monte Cristo




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I'm thinkin' some sort of uber-whacked-out death-metal sort of thing, with something like Vegnagun thrown in. :D Bearing that in mind, I might glance at the blurbs.

Wither and Clock
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You got rid of them. Yes, that's just like you. Getting rid of everything unpleasant instead of learning to put up with it.
— Aldous Huxley, Brave New World