It was a pretty interesting post, but Charlotte wouldn't have said anything back to Amelia because she wants everyone to think she is "mute." Also I don't like that she revealed Charlotte's power, I was hoping to reveal that later on in the storybook, other than that it's fine!
Oops I just forgot that she is mute. I will edit that
I thought that in this way Charlotte powers will also get displayed. It's been quite a some time I think now everyone should know her power but it's ok if you don't want it. Can you please suggest me a new dream Charlotte can have
This is random, but is anyone willing to have their character actually believe at least some of Aiden’s lies? It’s going to be really hard for me to write him if none of the characters are even slightly prone to his manipulation. Believing in him doesn’t mean a character is stupid, he’s just a really good liar, so your character can still be smart and fall for it. I just wanted to know what exactly I’m gonna be working with for the future
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winter can usually be found wherever Leya is = another fun fact ~Leya Winter you just have a whole cinematic universe in your head ~Wist winter is the only person who would survive the machine uprising ~Europa
Also, maybe Kendrick for Aiden too. He’s usually pretty nice and sweet, and if someone acts nice back to him, especially in this environment directly out of Verna with almost no one noticing him, Kendrick might become loyal to him.
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woah i actually made a post pretty radical if you ask me
Okay, thank you so much, @JoyDark. I think that’ll make it a lot easier for me to write him.
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winter can usually be found wherever Leya is = another fun fact ~Leya Winter you just have a whole cinematic universe in your head ~Wist winter is the only person who would survive the machine uprising ~Europa
@winterwolf0100 Just keep in mind if or when Aiden betrays Kendrick, well... you know what happened last time when Kendrick, uh, killed his teacher. Heh.
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woah i actually made a post pretty radical if you ask me
Your post looks great, @JoyDark! I especially like the ending—it feels kind of poetic.
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winter can usually be found wherever Leya is = another fun fact ~Leya Winter you just have a whole cinematic universe in your head ~Wist winter is the only person who would survive the machine uprising ~Europa
