Key's Keysmashing

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Hey @zwilliams welcome to YWS! You filled this out just fine. I finished your review!
name: key/string/perks
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novel: dream-ish (camp novmo '25)




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Bumping this because I want to reach my goal of hitting 350 reviews by the end of the year.
name: key/string/perks
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novel: dream-ish (camp novmo '25)




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Hi.

I would be glad if you can review the first chapter of my novel named "Jaime".

It is 9k words long.

Here's the link to it:

Jaime (working title) chapter 1

thanks so much for considering




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Alright, bumping this again.
name: key/string/perks
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novel: dream-ish (camp novmo '25)




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Can you review these please?

The Cosmic Dragon: Chapter 5

The Cosmic Dragon: Chapter 6

The Cosmic Dragon: Chapter 7
Dumbledore: "Now, it's great that you've been saving the school and all Harry, but unfortunately your grades have been a tad low, and, well... perhaps Gandalf could explain it better... hit it, Gandalf!

Gandalf: "YOU SHALL NOT PASS!"




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Could you review my work Entry One/?: Little Miss Horror Show
lp was here :)

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"Most opportunities are created by luck. It takes skill to grasp those opportunities and turn it into success." -Technoblade




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@Necromancer14 and @CassieList I'm done with your reviews, so the review place is open again. ^^
name: key/string/perks
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novel: dream-ish (camp novmo '25)




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Can you review my next chapter please?

The Cosmic Dragon: Chapter 8
Dumbledore: "Now, it's great that you've been saving the school and all Harry, but unfortunately your grades have been a tad low, and, well... perhaps Gandalf could explain it better... hit it, Gandalf!

Gandalf: "YOU SHALL NOT PASS!"




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@Necromancer14 Finished! I hope that helped!

Review requests are always nice!
name: key/string/perks
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novel: dream-ish (camp novmo '25)




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I would love it if you could review my poem, A reflection of uncertainty.
(It's lgbt-q related, just to be upfront.)
Thanks for considering!
When you're faced with something you don't understand, I think the most natural thing but also least interesting thing you can be is afraid.

-- Hank Green

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(previously whatchamacallit and Seirre)




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Hello @fraey! Could you please review my new short story?

The Sock That Picked Favorites
Dumbledore: "Now, it's great that you've been saving the school and all Harry, but unfortunately your grades have been a tad low, and, well... perhaps Gandalf could explain it better... hit it, Gandalf!

Gandalf: "YOU SHALL NOT PASS!"




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Forgot to update this, but thank you @whatchamacallit and @Necromancer14 for your requests! Those reviews are now done, so this fort is open for new requests. ^^
name: key/string/perks
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novel: dream-ish (camp novmo '25)




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Hey, hey. Wondering if you could review the first part of my short story - This is my world. For now and forever.
Much appreciated in advance. :-)




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Alright, @shima your review is now finished!

This fort is open yet again. ^^
name: key/string/perks
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novel: dream-ish (camp novmo '25)




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Hello fraey, could you review my next chapter for the Cosmic Dragon?

The Cosmic Dragon: Chapter 10
Dumbledore: "Now, it's great that you've been saving the school and all Harry, but unfortunately your grades have been a tad low, and, well... perhaps Gandalf could explain it better... hit it, Gandalf!

Gandalf: "YOU SHALL NOT PASS!"



The adjective should reinvent the noun.
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