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Hi there. Would you be able to review this short story of mine? Thank you!
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The sadness drains through me rather than skating over my skin. It travels through every cell to reach the ground. I filter it yet strangely enough, I keep what was pure and it is the dirt that leaves.




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Okay, @Fishr! Finally complete! I hope that helped! Sorry if it seemed harsh.
name: key/string/perks
pronouns: she/her/hers and they/them/theirs


novel: dream-ish (camp novmo '25)




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@schediophilia Finally done! I hope that helped!
name: key/string/perks
pronouns: she/her/hers and they/them/theirs


novel: dream-ish (camp novmo '25)




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Bumping in preparation for RevMo :D

I'll review basically anything >.>
name: key/string/perks
pronouns: she/her/hers and they/them/theirs


novel: dream-ish (camp novmo '25)




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Bumping again because I want to keep up with Team Tortoise and want to get my fifth gold star somewhat soon lol.
name: key/string/perks
pronouns: she/her/hers and they/them/theirs


novel: dream-ish (camp novmo '25)




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Hey concord! I was wondering if you could review my work searching for a second chance ?

Review it whenever you have the chance and on whatever you think needs work. <3
you can request a review here!
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@neptune

Done! I really liked that poem of yours and I had some spare time tonight to write up a ridiculously long review XD. Sorry agh. I hope that was helpful at least? Hehe.

c: <3 you're a lovely poet.
name: key/string/perks
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hay fray! even though this is a fanfiction, i hope it's not too hard to understand without context. i left a reply on the bottom of shadowvyper's review to clarify - and i hope that helps.

La pluie de l'aprés-midi (Miraculous Ladybug)
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When the last tree has fallen
And the rivers are poisoned
You cannot eat money


I do reviews: https://www.youngwriterssociety.com/viewtopic.php?f=188&t=108365




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@manilla

Finished! I've caught a few clips of that show with my cousin a while back, but I like the premise of it, and I liked your short fic. Hope that review was helpful!

It was fun to read! <3 c:

(I actually had wanted to review at some point, but then I got side-tracked, sorry lol.)
name: key/string/perks
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novel: dream-ish (camp novmo '25)




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Hello again! Would you care to read this poem? It's a 16+ for some mature content.

gratification is a privilege

Merci!
Pronouns: she/they

From the wild manila folder of YWS's office.

When the last tree has fallen
And the rivers are poisoned
You cannot eat money


I do reviews: https://www.youngwriterssociety.com/viewtopic.php?f=188&t=108365




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@manilla

Finally done! I spent probably too long on that review, whoops, but I did like the poem overall. Hope that was helpful.
name: key/string/perks
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novel: dream-ish (camp novmo '25)




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Hello! It doesn't matter that you haven't read part one but could you review:
Abnormals (Part 2)

Thank you if you do! This means so much :)!
"the wedding was charming if a little gauche; there's only so far new money goes.... it must have been her fault his heart gave out"




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@JadeLotus Finally done! Hope that helped.
name: key/string/perks
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novel: dream-ish (camp novmo '25)




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Hi ! Do you think you'd be able to review the chapter I have up? I'm new to this website and still trying to figure it all out. sorry if im doing this wrong! haha :)
-Z :)



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— Bryant McGill