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Hello there!

I'm ashlingwolf and I'm here to review! I'll review basically anything! Chapters, shorts, poetry, essays, lyrics, etcetera.. whatever you want! Your post doesn't have to be in the green room, but posts in the green room get priority over those that aren't. Besides that it's first come first serve.

Just post a link to the review in this thread, and I'll review it. If for some reason I can't review it, like if it's against my religion (who am I kidding I'm not religious), I'll message you with a sincere apology, and, hopefully, a review on one of your other works.

I will say that I have just moved to a new time zone, so I'm tired ALL THE TIME. I promise to try my best to keep up, but if it's slow or I mess up, that's probably why. Also, I do have a life, so if I haven't read your post a whole ten minutes after it went up, don't freak out. Be cool.

That's about it, do as you please, humans!
I reserve the right to close this thread at any time.
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So um I know you reviewed something of mine before. I have the other two chapters ready if you want...pwease?

A Lost Hope: Chapter 2- Escape from Tatooine

A Lost Hope: Chapter 3- Flight to Alderaan

It's a fanfic. Don't judge.
Fey he seemed, or the battle-fury of his fathers ran like new fire in his veins, and he was borne up on Snowmane like a god of old, even as Oromë the Great in the battle of the Valar when the world was young. - The Lord of the Rings: Return of the King




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Sure! I have an appointment today but when I get back, consider it done.




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Could you review my poems Life is Not as Rosy as It seems and Friend ?
Ejay




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Hey AshlingWolf!

Could I get a quick review on Huntress, Chapter 1: Pack (Book 1 in the Wolfsbane Chronicles)?

Good luck writing,

Featherstone9086

(P.S. You don't need to be nice. If you think I should rewrite it, feel free to say so, or whatever else you think needs to be done.)
"All that is gold does not glitter,
Not all those who wander are lost;
The old that is strong does not wither,
Deep roots are not reached by the frost."


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@featherstone9086

The deed is done.




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Hey there, ashlingwolf! I'm Alex, a Resources/Community moderator on YWS.

This is a message just to let you know that I have locked and archived this thread due to inactivity (of more than two years). We do this to keep the forum organized and make it more likely for the writers and poets to get the feedback they seek. If you'd like to reopen this thread at any point in the future, please contact me or any other resources moderator and we'd be more than happy to reopen it for you! Thank you for volunteer service to reviewing so far, we really appreciate it.

Good day!



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