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Hi, could you please review my newest poem. I am Water.

https://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work/felistia/I-am-Water-127001

Thanks for your time. :D




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Sure thing, felistia. I'm just finishing up a huge school project, so I should be able to review more chapters of Ruby of Fire soon as well. Thank you for your patience! :)
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Knight's Gauntlet

Hey I would appreciate it if you could give my first chapter a read through and let me know what you think :)

Whether or not you get to it, thanks in advance!

(That does not mean their won't be post-thanks) :)




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Hi there, the first chapter of my novel has plenty of reviews but none of the other chapters do, do you think you could go and give some of them a review?

Numb - Chapter 1




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Ready to review more!
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Could you review my speech for me please and tell me if it's any good? Thanks! It's called Joe's DIner.

Joe's Diner




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Hey! I'd like you to review one of my stories--Words Written in Lightning. I currently have four chapters out, and I'd love it if you could read all four! (I'm working really hard on this.)
Thanks!
Links:
Words Written in Lightning: Chapter 1
Words Written in Lightning: Chapter 2
Words Written in Lightning: Chapter 3
Words Written in Lightning: Chapter 4
"Red is the color of fate, right?"
-Zen Wisteria, Snow White with the Red Hair




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Hey! I'd really appreciate a review of my new poem, It's raining, but I don't believe that it's raining! Thanks so much :)
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be still, sad heart, and cease repining
behind the clouds is the sun still shining




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Hi there!

I was hoping you could review my novel chapters for me? I'm looking for reviews on my chapters 3 and 4, but it definitely helps if you read the previous chapters, for background info and such. Here are the links for chapters 3 and 4, prior chapters can also be accessed from there as well:

Chapter 3, The Name Game
Chapter 4.1, The Name Game
Chapter 4.2, The Name Game

I'm also looking for someone to regularly review my chapters as I put them up, so if my story at all interests you and you're willing, I would love for you to do that! If not I totally understand :)

Thanks in advance!




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Ready for more reviews!
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Could you please review:

Starlight: Chapter 2 (Part II)

Thanks in advance!




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Could you review my first chapter of my novel.
The Clan Of The Dead.
The clan of the dead_Chapter one: The origins
Thank you!



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