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Okay I have reviewed it as best I can. I hope I helped. :D




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Done. Ready for the next review. Please read description at the top of the page about what I can and won't read before posting.




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Please review my novel, New Haven. Here is the link for the first chapter:
New Haven: Chapter 1: The Train of Memories




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Sure I will get round to them as soon as I can. :D




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I have finished reviewing your work and I am ready for the next lot of review requests.




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Hi!
You've already reviewed my first chapter, but right after you reviewed it I had an epiphany. I decided to fix my first chapter, add a scene, remove all flashbacks from chapter 1 and write a prologue. I would love it if you could re-review chapter 1 and review my prologue.
Thank you so much and your previous review did not go to waste because you helped me figure lots of stuff out when I was fixing my first chapter.
New Haven: Prologue




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I would be happy to review it again. :D




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@MadWriter7 I have finished the review and I am ready for the next lot of reviews.




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Ah, hello. I saw you mentioned you would keep up with novels... As you've already reviewed Chapter 1.1 of this novel, would it be any trouble to request a review on In the Absence of Stars - 1.2?




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Sure. I will get to it right away. :D




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Hi! I am new to YWS and have just posted my first poem on this site. I would be infinitely grateful for a review, if you don't mind! Here's the link--> I'm Only 18
Thank you!! :3
"We are, as a species, addicted to story. Even when the body goes to sleep, the mind stays up all night, telling itself stories" ~Jonathan Gottschall




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Sure. I will get to it right away. :D




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@InfiniteRectangles @Jericho I have finished reviewing your work and I am ready for the next lot of reviews. I can take as many as you like. :D




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Hey there! I would really appreciate it if you could review my satire for me! The Creativity Epidemic It is the first satire I have written and I could use some feedback! Thanks! :3
"We are, as a species, addicted to story. Even when the body goes to sleep, the mind stays up all night, telling itself stories" ~Jonathan Gottschall



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