Novel Reviews

felistia · 2015-11-23T22:21:33Z

Hi everyone, Felistia here and I would like to review some of your works. :D I will review: I will only review Novels. I will not review once off chapters, once you ask me I will review all your chapters unless told not to. I won't start in the middle of a novel. I will start from the beginning and give you a review on each chapter. I will point out spelling mistakes, help with plot points and characters and give an over all in depth review. If I don't get back to you with in three day's feel free to nag me. I really like fantasy, action\adventure, dramatic, suspense, humor. Fan fiction just tell my what it's a fan fiction and I get back to you. The answer will most likely be yes. :D I will not review: scripts, articles, essays, short stories or poems. I won't read: horror, spiritual, supernatural. I won't read: 14, 16,18 M,L,V The only thing I ask in return is that you could have a look at my story. https://www.youngwriterssociety.com/viewtopic.php?f=159&t=105384 Here's a summary about it. The Quest for Fire series ~ Book one Into the Mists Summary for the Quest for Fire series. This is the story of a dragon named Zoltar who's tribe is on the brink of extinction. Their only hope is the Ruby of Fire. Can Zoltar cross the continent of Megalonia to find this mysterious jewel or will he perish along the way? There is no ratings for this story and is for everyone. It is a fantasy\action\adventure story. If you like the Wings of Fire by TUI T. SUTHERLAND, I think you'll enjoy this book. :D I look forward to reading all your work. Let the requests roll in. :D :D

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Sun Feb 07, 2016 8:23 pm

felistia says... · Sun Feb 07, 2016 8:23 pm

Come on. I don't bite.

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Sun Feb 07, 2016 11:09 pm

Rascalover says... · Sun Feb 07, 2016 11:09 pm

A review of this and chapter one of my new romance novel? Please

Ohana Means Family~ Chapter Two

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http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic38078.html

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Mon Feb 08, 2016 2:33 am

felistia says... · Mon Feb 08, 2016 2:33 am

Hi @Rascalover. I will get to it as soon as I can. Could you please tell me which new romance novel it is that you want me to review, so just to make sure that I review the right piece.

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Mon Feb 08, 2016 2:48 am

Rascalover says... · Mon Feb 08, 2016 2:48 am

felistia wrote:Hi @Rascalover. I will get to it as soon as I can. Could you please tell me which new romance novel it is that you want me to review, so just to make sure that I review the right piece.

Ohana Means Family. The first two chapters have been posted in the romance section.

Thanks!!

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Mon Feb 08, 2016 8:21 am

felistia says... · Mon Feb 08, 2016 8:21 am

Rascalover done reviewing your work.

As for the rest of you review seekers out there, I am open.

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Mon Feb 29, 2016 10:30 pm

felistia says... · Mon Feb 29, 2016 10:30 pm

And still waiting. Come on. I need to get at least one review done a day and it might as well be one someone asked for.

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Wed Mar 02, 2016 9:57 pm

BlueJayWalker10 says... · Wed Mar 02, 2016 9:57 pm

Hey! I'm Jay Walker. I'm really unsure as to how good all my works are, though I already have a couple reviews on my works. I love to as many opinions as possible. (I really value other people's opinions.)
If possible, I'd like for you to all four chapters of Words Written in Lighting, but it's okay if you only do the first chapter.
Words Written in Lightning is a Action/Adventure Fantasy Novel.
The first chapter is here:
Words Written in Lightning: Chapter 1
Second chapter:
Words Written in Lightning: Chapter 2
Third chapter:
Words Written in Lightning: Chapter 3
Fourth chapter:
Words Written in Lightning: Chapter 4
Thanks!

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Wed Mar 02, 2016 10:01 pm

felistia says... · Wed Mar 02, 2016 10:01 pm

@BlueJayWalker10 I will get to it right away.

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Fri Mar 04, 2016 12:27 am

Sarah12 says... · Fri Mar 04, 2016 12:27 am

Please review my novel Redemption? Thanks in advance.

https://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work.php?id=127592#comments

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Fri Mar 04, 2016 12:52 am

zsmith says... · Fri Mar 04, 2016 12:52 am

Hey, the first chapter of my novel has plenty of reviews but none of the other chapters do, do you think you could go and give some of them a review?
Numb - Chapter 1

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Fri Mar 04, 2016 3:32 am

felistia says... · Fri Mar 04, 2016 3:32 am

Hi @zsmith I am really sorry, but I can't review your story as it is rated 16 and I don't like reading anything rated above 12. Sorry again.

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Sat Apr 30, 2016 9:49 am