I can relate to this on every level. I can feel the stress and pressure eminating from this poem, it captures entering adulthood perfectly. Constantly feeling lost, tired, stressed and not taken seriously but also being forced to make decisions that ultimately decide the course of the rest of your life and still someone constantly being told you're "too young to understand how the world works"
"They tell me I’m just a child.
That I don’t know anything yet.
But then they expect me to make adult decisions."
This line really does some up everything about entering the adult world! Every line is so powerful because honestly it's so real, it's the sad reality that nothing is the same, nothing's as magical when we are forced to grow up. Anyways I didn't find much to critique I think it flows well and has a power/relatable message behind it. Keep up the great work!
Points: 18
Reviews: 7
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