The Maze of the Guilds DT

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Choose Zyreli's fate

  • 1) Through magic or steel, Zyreli's quest will when he draws his final breath in battle. 21%
  • 2) Let Zyreli meet his end unaware as he foolishly dies by the hands of a trap in one of the Towers. 14%
  • 3) A fate truly worse than death- enslavement. Zyreli was too weak to withstand the stronger forces of those who guard the Pages, and will spend a lifestyle in servitude of them, until age or starvation claims his life. 64%

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What should Zyreli's three spells be?
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Raevelle Aisling Ghornal is an assassin of the House Dimir, yet hunting is mentioned in her skill set, with no other reason. So why can't Severan also be a good hunter?
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@AstralHunter are Azorius and Selesnya related to water, by any chance?

Even if they were, though... Nah. I can't join. This looks amazing, and considering that Conjurer's the one managin' it, it most certainly is.
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If I join this SB, I'll enjoy myself, I KNOW I will, but I will be crushed by the weight of all my activities and my inability to organize myself properly.
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Aww. Well, real life takes precedence over anything else, so while it would have been great to have you here, I understand. (At least I tried. ;) ) But yes, the Azorius Senate is related to water, while the Selesnya Conclave is related to nature. Both are affiliated with light.

@LordZeus, I see the problem. While Shade is still not allowed to be a hunter/tracker, I shall restrict @QueenOfHearts' character's abilities so that "hunting" simply means killing animals in they way she would kill humans (or other sentient races), which is to say not in the ideal manner. Shade can do the same, but since you never included it in your profile and it therefore doesn't count as a skill, you don't have to be specific about the restrictions - they are readily apparent.

@Halfbloodcheetah, any standard spells concerning fire and water would suffice. You can think in terms of ordinary combat magic, such as the ever-reliant fireball, the deadly ice spike, etc. But as long as its power is relatively average and it is connected with the Izzet League's elements, you can add it. (I shall have a look at it tomorrow, then.)

Also, to everyone who will add more spells, either because they have to create a new CP or because they only had two, please include not only the effects of the spells, but also their side-effects, effect duration, and the cost required to cast the spells.
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Hey, so I just created a character, let me know if there is anything I need to add/remove. I really like this Storybook!
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@candywizard yay you joined! :p

@astralhunter with Nef (since I had to put Twisting Nether on hold) I was wondering if I could add in an extra spell as a replacement? I'll probably add it later tonight if possible (@TheClockworkConjurer)




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*shudders* @SpiriteWolfe, reading your character page on Zefer (I think) has doomed us all. I believe my next character might be Morn-ish ;-;
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Go ahead, @Deskro. I shall have a look as soon as you are done and I am online.

@15253, what about a Ren-ish character? Have you ever made another version of him?

@CandyWizard, I love your character! There are just two minor issues:
1. I have no problem with Isperia being the one who saved Mannaric, but since he had saved Mannaric 29 years ago, that he means he was already Grand Judge for quite some time by then. If you were to remove the "who was barely a Judge at the time"-part with something that indicates he was on, as clichéd as this sounds, some sort of "secret mission"., it would work much better. (This would explain why he, the Grand Judge of the Azorius Senate, was sneaking around in Simic territory.)
2. In reference to your spells, please add the following:
AstralHunter wrote:Also, to everyone who will add more spells, either because they have to create a new CP or because they only had two, please include not only the effects of the spells, but also their side-effects, effect duration, and the cost required to cast the spells.

Once you addressed both matters, I shall happily accept your profile. ;)
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@AstralHunter Thank you! ^^

I will get to doing those straight away! I wrote the character at about 2 am this morning (because of fear that someone would take the open slot xD), so I didn't read everything. >.> But I will do so today.

Super excited about this one, can't wait to see how the characters turn out.
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@AstralHunter I just made the changes, hopefully they are satisfactory. The line was removed, and the spells now have penalties to their usage. ^^

Forgot to mention earlier, the banners of the factions are awesome. @TheClockworkConjurer, you have done an amazing job!
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Ok, this seems like a bit much, with this third consecutive comment, but I just read about the lack of non-human characters. I could make my character Mannaric a Light Elf, not sure what some of the other species are.

Writing this I just had an idea for a Selesnya Conclave character, but it would be a Technological Being, so I'm not sure if you'll like it.

Edit: I was reading the comments to catch up with what you have been discussing, but after taking a look at the characters I see that it is no longer an issue. I could still do the Tech Being if it is within the storybook's regulations.
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Hey, even though this is the maze and all, could there be alliances among the contestants? It seems like there would be, at least at the start, in a situation like this.

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astral ren is a morn-ish character x3
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Zyreli's three spells are
Firebreath
Healing
Confusion
Someone needs to make Captain Cold a fursona.




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~O3o~ Ren is NOT a morn character! He actually goes through development instead of being evil and sad all the time.
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