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I did it, wrote your review!
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Imma ready to roar and review! Does anyone want a review from the Lion Princess Leo? :D
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Hey Pretzel.
I was wondering you could review my work.
it's a really short short story :-D
Inevitable Outcome Part 01: Flight (Edited)
thanks
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@Pretzelsing

I'm not a poet, but I have started trying my hand on poems. This is my most recent work that I'm actually proud of.

Father Doesn't Like The Noise *Edited*

TRIGGER WARNING: CONTENT ABOUT ABUSE

Thanks!
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Spoiler
Sorry but I can't read it because of that trigger warning.
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@Pretzelsing

Oh, it's fine! Don't worry about it. :)

I'm sorry for causing you any trouble.
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*bumps up this thread to show off her updated and colorful first post*
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Yes @yizhongt- I will be glad to read through it and critique it. Will submit the review to you soon!

EDIT: Already submitted.
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Please review When Dream and Reality Collide [Chapter 1.1] for me! :)
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Hey Pretzelsing, could you please review:

Chalice of Life: Chapter 8

Could you please focus on my past/present tense. Thank you !!




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darn, the work I wanted reviewed is 16+ <.>
elysian: (adj.) beautiful or creative; divinely inspired; peaceful and perfect.

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3 In proper english love means heart sickness

If you feel like it, can you review Chapter two too, please?

(I know you'll want to review the previous chapters, but please don't read the Prologue. Please)

Umm, can you check word choice, sentence structure and all the forgotten details for me? Also, I'd like you to tell me what you think will happen next, and your favourite moments.

Cheers!
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@Lylas, if you really want me to, let me go ahead and take a look at it.

@Lorelie and @yizhongt sorry about taking forever but I just totally forgot. Will work on it this week/next week.
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