Golden Pretzel Gears

Hey, my favourite Pretzel.

Would you feel up to reviewing one of my saturnine short stories?

What It Is to Be Özlem

Hi PretzelStick, I know that I have asked for a review on my story before, but I would love if you could read the whole story. Pretty please.
I found your last review very helpful and could use more on the rest of my chapters. Same story as before, though I have changed the name. Search for the Ruby of Fire.

https://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work/felistia/Search-for-the-Ruby-of-Fire-Chapter-1-124445
Thank you for taking the time to read this.

Hi! Can you maybe review my story? I need a little help with it. Thanks!

@leslieloo. You have to link me to your story in order for me to review it. I have better things to do than go through the links in your portfolio.
Thanks!

Hi

Could I request a review?

It's found at https://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work.php?id=126545

Thanks,

-AnarchyWolf

P.S. you said you were kind of careful about what you read so I'm going to clear up the big about the drugs. They're not actual drugs, they're medical drugs needed for the 'race' in question to survive.

Hey! Can I get a review of this first chapter?

Chapter 1: Revelations

Edit: I need some requests for R.E.D.

*bump*

Also done and reviewed @leslieloo @AnarchyWolf @SkarletteRose

Who's next that wants it?

I'd love it (and you) if you could review Ruby of Revenge [Part 1]!

Hi.

I would really love if you could review my latest poem. Freedom. It is mostly description based. Thank you for your time.

https://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work/felistia/Freedom-127460

Hey Pretzel, whenever you have the time:this could use some love!
Thanks!

Since it's been pretty inactive in here for a while, I guess give you this. Thanks in advance.

Prayer Labyrinth