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  • Sujana
    Apr 12, 2016


    you'll have to be patient with me i can be very unfocused and slow

    Lorelie Ellstar, I'm so sorry. I'll be leaving your novel and my reviews (and my novel and your reviews) for some other time. Don't worry, this is no goodbye, but I've having trouble making the last illustrations... the worse of it, the day I was finally getting them on track I've heard of the news of my father's death. This was all too sudden, but, dear friend, I promise I will get back to this, you and Yewis. I'm so sorry, please forgive me :/
    May 5, 2016

  • OMG! Chapter Four of Share and Cherish (unrevised edit) is now published as soon as Review Day begins!

    I want to thank all my past reviewers:
    @Buggiedude2340 (I know you're still there!) @hermione315 @BlueAfrica @Carlito @Pretzelstick @Artemis28 @sinistercutlass @Dracula (you were the ones who took the time to read some of my novel, plus review it, plus encourage me to keep writing it: TY so much!)

    But before you read it, I need you to consider this being the product of an entire week of paper-writing and computer-editing (mostly as a consequence of the monthly Review Day being postponed) that gave no space for introducing the planned illustrations (instead, you get to read my awesome image descriptions ;) ) Somewhere within the next weeks I'm planning to make my drawings for this chapter, so just you wait :D

    Phew! It's been more than six months since I've published the third chapter. It took a lot of me, but I knew in my heart I couldn't let our narrator die out :) Nothing could have prepared me for what was next: a half-written chapter (needing lots of trimming), a cheesy plot (with lots of holes in it) and more than nine pages (on paper) to write. The result is a bulky chapter who surpasses in twice the extent of the previous one.

    Spoiler! :
    Actually, one of the decisions I had to take was whether to split in two separate parts or letting the following chapters grow. I was forced to choose the latter :P .

    I hope you guys like it! And I'll keep you posted about the illustrated and "final" version. Cheers!

  • I'm back. What have I missed? I've probably missed something since there eleven days. Umm pink has invaded usernames, I guess it's:
    A: some strange fashion
    B: God's way to remind me pink is not red
    C: NaRevWriMo survivors

    Either way, I'm happy. @Skydreamer's at it again (:

    Mea Hint: It's the third one. :D
    Oct 22, 2015

    Lorelie And we have a winner :D (and it is me)
    Oct 24, 2015

  • A message from Big Brother...


    Sep 29, 2015

    Lorelie Thank you @willachilles
    This is too good to be true (:

    Oct 7, 2015

  • 3 In proper english love means heart sickness

    It's out. This is the last one of the initial draft, so feel free to give suggestions for the follow-up chapters.

    @Buggiedude2340 @hermione315 @BlueAfrica @Carlito @Pretzelsing

  • Skydreamer
    Sep 22, 2015

    You are too adorbes! Thanks for reading my articles

  • Lorelie
    Sep 20, 2015

    #5reasonstosmile #fivereasonstosmile

    Thanks to @Buggiedude2340 I'm now accepting this... (period)

    1. Three works on YWS: It was hard, I kinda left it behind, I tried to forget it, I tried getting back to it... but I made three works. If I leave YWS in the future, at least I can brag I wrote, typed, proofread, illustrated and published three works here. Not much, but not bad at all :D

    2. Nine reviews till star number two: Review Days are hard. I kinda gave up on #narevwrimo (I'm keeping the counter though) but I wish I can work to star two. I'll probably leave the long reviews aside, but I'm thinking of creating a WRFF topic of my own for jumping in the middle of novels (and other stuff I forbid myself to do with real books :D)

    3. Almost publishing the third chapter: It's in paper, now I have to copy it to my laptop. But oh, the drawing(s)! They're so hard! I wish I had other (more simple) better ideas for them...

    4. Sixteen Followers: Two more and there's eighteen. I kinda miss on the meaning of "follow", and I might have to tidy up my list someday...

    5. My heart went on vacation: For the first time on a long time, I managed to stop being in love. Mostly because I tidied up my mind during my vacations. I don't feel cold, though. I feel warmer and fairer. I might turn that into a lyrics someday. It's funny to be free, and I hope one day someone will deserve to take that away from me (How awkward it is to say this!) Right now, I love my character, and my character only...

    I'll tag people now:
    @Big Brother

    Let's see if all these tags work *crosses fingers*

    Lorelie It worked! I changed the last tag, I discovered, I... *jumps in excitement*

    *hides until followers are notified*

    Sep 20, 2015

  • Goodbye my 200 points. Hello sweet reviews! As promised...

    @roeckercody @Velvet0Alchemy @TalesOFaMadman
    @Buggiedude2340 @hermione315
    I plead for your simpathy.

    The second chapter of Share and Cherish is out. Here it is:
    2 Telly take away sound equals pleasure take away headache


  • Where all the cute people?


  • So, how've you been?

  • Caught up in the middle of another Review Day, Lorelie rushed in to make more reviews than last time. After accomplishing some miserable three reviews and a total of 315 points, she fell on her knees before the cruel setback of another Review Day loss. It was close, but still not enough.


  • I'm back!

    @Unconsoled here's my follow thanks/consolation gift.

    Spoiler! :
    If you weren't the one I talked to on chat, consider this a mildly generous gesture of random kindness (or not).

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  • Just fixed the banner.

    willachilles Image

    Spoiler! :
    I finally understand something in my life.

    Aug 16, 2015

    Lorelie The spoiler kinda tells it off...
    Aug 16, 2015

  • Lorelie
    Aug 15, 2015

    Hey! It's my 26th post and I even got points for it!

  • Lorelie
    Aug 15, 2015

    I finally got to try out Spotify and... it sucks!
    Spoiler! :
    The thing shuffles my songs and then suggests me something else... I. Do. Not want. Frigging. Mad Hatter's choices. On. My. Playlist. (no offense @Hattable)

    Good news:
    I've fixed it. I'm now listening to my shuffled playlist on all my favourite artist's albums (the five of them) AND I got to choose the first track freely (not influenced by the album nor the big picks). I'm a genius (:

    Bad News: It's a bit cold here. And I'm feeling lonely. Oh well!

The most difficult thing is the decision to act, the rest is merely tenacity.
— Amelia Earhart