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Title says it all. :D

Step right up and get'chya literary works reviewed, free o' charge! (In other words, no need to review anything of mine in return.)

I will review basically anything. Yep, that's right! So if you have a bunch of chapters that have been sadly neglected, I'll be more than happy to take a look at 'em. :D

My reviewing style: I try to be as honest as possible, but polite at the same time. In other words, you don't have to worry about getting a soul-crushing remark from this girl. I'm basically incapable of being mean in my reviews. ;) Oh, and I think I'm pretty helpful, too, judging by the comments the authors have given me.

Guess that's all. NOW GIVE ME SOME LINKS! :smt003

Updated as of February 25th, 2017: Closed for the time being, since I won't be too active for a bit. I'll reopen once I return.
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Hello! I would love a review on my novel Kiss the Damsel, chapter one and two. If you have time. I would also love you to review The Angelon Kingdom. Thanks! <3http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work.php?id=10705http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work.php?id=110496
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Hi! I always wanted a review from you.
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I have read many of your reviews and loved them :D.


The Perfect Thief (Revised) Chapter 1 I have also written a prologue for it, but I am planning to rewrite the prologue. So you can just read the first chapter. Thanks :P




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Great, I'll get right on those! And aww, thank you, Gaurav. :D




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Shotgun kisses.

If you could review this I would love it :D Thank you so much
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retrodisco666 wrote:http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work.php?id=110672#c463079

If you could review this I would love it :D Thank you so much


Reviewed! :smt003




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Hey there! You seem really nice, and I was wondering if you could review the prologue of my novel for me?

It's called Winter Asylum. I'll give you the link ;)

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MysteryMe wrote:Hey there! You seem really nice, and I was wondering if you could review the prologue of my novel for me?

It's called Winter Asylum. I'll give you the link ;)

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work.php?id=110734


Reviewed! And thanks for the compliment. :smt003




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Hi! I have posted the second chapter of my story. Hope you like it :D The Perfect Thief Chapter 2




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Gaurav009 wrote:Hi! I have posted the second chapter of my story. Hope you like it :D The Perfect Thief Chapter 2


I'll try to get to it tomorrow during Review Day. :D




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Do you think you could check out the prologue of my novel? Azazel: Prologue
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queerelves wrote:Do you think you could check out the prologue of my novel? Azazel: Prologue


Certainly! I'll take a look at it tomorrow. :D




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Lucrezia wrote:
queerelves wrote:Do you think you could check out the prologue of my novel? Azazel: Prologue


Certainly! I'll take a look at it tomorrow. :D


Thank you! :D
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This already has a few reviews, but Children

Thanks! :D
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