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Re: Love
I think I like it. It is special and the way it is written, it sends out different meanings I think all at once; which in sense I think makes ...
May 14, 2010 -
Re: Zombies Want My Brain, part 1
Hello I will have to be honest and say that it has potential. If I talk about the story line, well its obvious to me and someone else that, its ...
May 14, 2010 -
Re: A Dream for You
Hello I have never heard the song you referred to but I think you lyrics rock! I love the flow, it's effortless. And they are honest. I think most lyricists ...
May 13, 2010 -
Re: I Will Remember
Well, it's OK. I will give you that much. But for my preference, although written beautifully, I feel it is too straight forward and simple. Too simple. There is no ...
May 13, 2010 -
Re: Hate.
Deep stuff. I think the poem is great. it has this flow of constant emotions that make me picture myself in the situation and in turn sympathize. Besides the spelling, ...
May 11, 2010 -
Re: My Music
I enjoyed it. it reminds me of the precious moments when I play my guitar but this time under a tree with the wind blowing on my face. I think ...
May 11, 2010 -
Re: Morning murders.
An interesting choice of words in the different ideas presented. I like that about it. The poem was generally good, deep. I will say it again, I liked it. And ...
May 10, 2010 -
Re: Promised Place
Wooow. It is like I am watching a round of well deserved chick flicks. Wait, that is an understatement; what I mean is, one of those movies set in the ...
May 10, 2010 -
Re: Hypotheses
...I am speechless. This is great. This is a simple poem but the way it just comes down on you is just too complex for the mind. I am still ...
May 10, 2010 -
Re: Life
I would like to agree with Navita in most parts of the poem. The poem is what I expect it to be; which should not be the case. I mean, ...
May 10, 2010 -
Re: lullaby
Good intention is what this poem has. I think it lacks a bit of emotion and does not connect the reader(me :)) as it is supposed to. That is the ...
May 9, 2010 -
Re: Silence
Untalented? Did you give yourself that name? If you did, it is not being modest; it is a diss, disrespect to what I have just read. This poem is like ...
May 9, 2010 -
Re: That delicate touch.
You are really 13? That is some talent. I think this poem totally descirbes a mother as many people view them, with love. This poem basically makes me want to ...
May 9, 2010
