There are parts I like and parts I don't. Sometimes I thought, "Oh, great, another teenage angst poem about some morbidly depressed emo person." But at the same time, I felt like there were points that actually really tapped into some pure emotion,especially lines like this--
So I bow my head
To spare them from my ugliness
and to spare myself from theirs.
I really felt that you were feeling this way, and for a moment I almost felt something...hmm...I don't know. As if I sympathized with you, because in that moment you sympathized with both them and yourself. A mutual understanding of hatred, I suppose? I don't know, but it felt really real to me. Overall, I actually did really like this poem. Nice.
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