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Hello there You are crazy, this is really good. I can see Jeepers Creepers (a classic ;) ) had a huge impact on you. I loved the beat to this ...

Hello there :) I thought I would do the honors. Well, as I was reading this it did not strike me as a poem as such but a story line ...

Hi there Alright, I liked it. Boy, you have got a lot say here and I heard it. Just watch out for a few punctuation errors like not capitalizing "I" ...

Hello there Hey I actaully thought that this was not bad. The first stanza really drew in my attention, the way it flowed with all the comments and compliments etc. ...

Hello there I think that a lot has been said before me. I liked the poem and the consistent rhyming which was not annoying. I also think that you executed ...

Hello there And so I long for nightfall, when darkness covers our faces, it hides the scars of worry that the world has cut into your brow, and the sleepless ...

Hello there and welcome to YWS Wow, this was lovely, just lovely. I thought that you did a really good job with the imagery and I could really feel the ...

Hello there I will have to disagree with the comments above. I actually thought that this was pretty good. There was a lot of good imagery, I liked how you ...

Hello there I will start by first outlining some of the mistakes It wasn't fair. was not . Only use "wasn't" when quoting a character. You seem to have done ...

Hello there :D This was...interesting. I did not like it that much. Maybe it's because I did not grab the message. As I read the poem, I could not draw ...

Hello there Well, you know me, I am a fan of your stories and thus I've nothing to complain about on this one. I saw no spelling mistakes and no ...

Hello there This is a thought provoking poem indeed and I liked it...how it leaves me in a world of thought. This is true and creative :) The last three ...

Hello there :) Well, this was a little off for me. Firstly, I think you should try and separate your paragraphs first. And now we get into the story. I ...

Hello there I will start off with outlining the mistakes I spotted There was nowhere left to turn, she was surround by his lightening speed I think you meant "surrounded". ...

Hello there This is a dark poem. But I like it because it is emotional and I can feel the emotion. I think you did a good job with your ...