Have you realised that ten is our number?
We were born with it in our hand
But you can adopt it with your mystery.
You see the fun…you see the thrill
DON’T BURST
It's hard, I know you will
But just to inform you. We saw. We came. We ha-
-ve no hypotheses.
Shame. Nonsense poems are perfect: nearly.

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telle_04
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TheUnknownPoet wrote:Have you realised that ten is our number?
We were born with it in our hand
But you can adopt it with your mystery.
You see the fun…you see the thrill
DON’T BURST
It's hard, I know you will
But just to inform you. We saw. We came. We ha-
-ve no hypotheses.
Shame. Nonsense poems are perfect: nearly.


hello, unknown poet.

nonsense poems are perfect: nearly

definitely agree with this.

-telle.

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ziggiefred
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Hello there
This is a thought provoking poem indeed and I liked it...how it leaves me in a world of thought. This is true and creative :)
The last three lines

But just to inform you. We saw. We came. We ha-
-ve no hypotheses.
Shame. Nonsense poems are perfect: nearly.

They are well written.
Good job.



Very well; I hear; I admit, but I have a voice too, and for good or evil mine is the speech that cannot be silenced.
— Joseph Conrad, Heart of Darkness