Ten

by TheUnknownPoet

Published June 14, 2010

Have you realised that ten is our number?
We were born with it in our hand
But you can adopt it with your mystery.
You see the fun…you see the thrill
DON’T BURST
It's hard, I know you will
But just to inform you. We saw. We came. We ha-
-ve no hypotheses.
Shame. Nonsense poems are perfect: nearly.

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telle_04
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telle_04 wrote a review Review · Jun 15, 2010

TheUnknownPoet wrote:Have you realised that ten is our number?
We were born with it in our hand
But you can adopt it with your mystery.
You see the fun…you see the thrill
DON’T BURST
It's hard, I know you will
But just to inform you. We saw. We came. We ha-
-ve no hypotheses.
Shame. Nonsense poems are perfect: nearly.


hello, unknown poet.

nonsense poems are perfect: nearly

definitely agree with this.

-telle.

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ziggiefred
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ziggiefred wrote a review Review · Jun 14, 2010

Hello there
This is a thought provoking poem indeed and I liked it...how it leaves me in a world of thought. This is true and creative :)
The last three lines

But just to inform you. We saw. We came. We ha-
-ve no hypotheses.
Shame. Nonsense poems are perfect: nearly.

They are well written.
Good job.



I exist as I am, that is enough
— Walt Whitman