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Randomians my girlfriend and we do them together and i was thinking of changing it a bit which i will.

Thanks so much nate for everything, three cheers for nate.

Lol that is funny, its abit mean to make miss E's hair on fire but hey it dosn't matter.

Wahey final fantasy 8 my favourite i'm liking the chapter 3 angel. :thumb: is this the bit where they go to timber to do there seeD test cause it sounds ...

I know whats going on cause i'm used to this sort of thing.

Its alright i suppose the flow was just there, i got confused at one bit but i get it now so yeah, it does need work but it is good ...

Loving it magicman :thumb: theres nothing wrong with it at all seriously.

Thats really good soleil2005 umm why did you put [/pre] just wandering apart from that wahey

Quite intresting bush is a demon, and why a lizard man random, but its really good no problems so yeah.

I really liked it, it had such amazing story in it that it worked brilliantly, the flow worked extremly well well done :thumb:

Thats good i liked the ending that was cool, you could change it abit maybe but i don't know exactly what needs changing

thats cool i liked that it was just super

well at least you gave me a hint on changing it so thanks for that

i liked that the beginning was nice the last was awesome and it had the flow :thumb:

i LIKED it it had the flow very nice i liked this bit I tried to breathe some love into your darkness excellent :thumb: w00t