Published April 17, 2006
its turning me around
i don't know what to do
so help me ohh please help me
cause i don't know what i'm doing
ohhhhh you've got me
i've had enough of this
i've had enough of live
burn it away destroy it
theres no point of this anymore
i need help i'll fall into the shadows
i'll fall into the world with no person cares
its time i'll die its the final certain for me
i'll fall i'll fall into the ground
ohhhhh you've got me
i've had enough of this
i've had enough of live
burn it away destroy it
theres no point of this anymore
but there here its to late
i've got to fall into the ground
i've got to do this theres no stopping me now
you've lost this war and i have won
its to late for you now
ohhhhh you've got me
i've had enough of this
i've had enough of live
burn it away destroy it
theres no point of this anymore
ohhhhh you've got me
i've had enough of this
i've had enough of live
burn it away destroy it
theres no point of this anymore
ohhhhhhhhh you've lost it i've won it
its to late for you now its to late for you now
and you've lost and i have won
also seen in my blog i think this thing needs changing if so let me know and i'll change
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i've had enough of this
i've had enough of live
I don't really understand this part. What does it mean that you've had enough of live? You could try changing it to something like life.
but there here its to late
That line is a little confusing too. Using there and here is sort of contradictory, but that might be what you were going for. If you only put it there to have the right syllable count, you might want to change it to get the meaning across better.
well at least you gave me a hint on changing it so thanks for that
Ok, I'm sorry sweetie to be such a party pooper but the guy who said this song has real depth is lying. Its too repetitive, the lyrics arent very well thought out and dont seem to convey whatever you're trying to say..I think the twist at the end works but not in the way that you've written it. You could do so much better darling and I'm only saying this because nobody seems to add constructive criticism..they just seem to applaud like performing monkeys or something. Think of why you wrote this song, there must be some sort of underlying metaphor or something that you could work from or something but as it is this song is nothing more than mediocre. I'm sorry babe
Bella xx
thanks randomian
Wow!! this is great!! It haz really gud depth!!