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i liked it had the flow totally awesome i loved this bit outwards in a four-dimensional spiral passing by viewing with curious fascinations that was great :mrgreen:

:lol: lol hahaha *stops laughing in about an hour* thats really funny i liked this bit oooooooooooooooooo... Connor the elephant pack his trunk and said goodbye to the freaks of ...

hmm very intresting i perticually liked this bit This is what anger means, darling, to drown and breathe and drown and then to swim your own way down; to lose ...

:lol: lol brilliant learning opitunites rule don't dis them anybody or i'll get nate to hit you with a rolling pin quite hard as well have you got the one ...

wow your good at this magicman i liked the this bit But I guess I wasn't enough for youNot enough to hold on to what a intresting sentance that is ...

i really liked that excellent i really liked this bit I am a benediction to the living world, an oblation by the Lord. I am not obstinate. (the poll) i ...

i liked it alot especially the ending not anymore, I lost it when I lost my mind. and i also liked this one to no more sunny summer days. no ...

thats intreting it sertenly had a flow so thats good i liked this short bit I snap my fingers and the sound rings I say its gone but you don't ...

its alright i liked the first verse very intresting people cry people try,to become perfect people die but you feel insignifigant i was thinking instead of insignifigant i would put ...

very nice the bit i liked was do you need a hand do you need a heart will you need someone to tell you how lucky you are could I ...

=P~ humm coffee oh yeah nice poem i don't tend to read the long poems but now you just confinced me i perticualy liked this bit I settle with the ...

thats really great i really like this bit That she can’t speak, Skin ripping, Blood dripping, Wrist hurts, She falls to the dirt, And weeps, Goes home, And sleeps, Wakes ...

coool i really like this bit So it was the end, we went our seperate ways It was so awkward the first few days. Then the phone rang, just as ...

woh like the use of rhyme i really like this bit My world is black and grey now, Won’t the troubles leave today? Mondays, Tuesdays, Morning, Night, It blends until ...

woo that's the name of my road good lyric i really like this line Coming home along the Abbey Road Universe flows through a paper cup Tell your fools to ...