I thought I saw
standing inside heavens door
a face, ohhh a face
a face I hadn't seen before
could it be
the anger in my heart is taking over me and
nothing, woah nothing
is going right in my mind
I'm sure you've noticed me
the way you stand and stare
the way you look as though I've died
but you don't know the truth
surely there is nothing you can do
the tears fly and I notice
I hadn't seen this side of you
and it's gone
it's too late for me to say goodbye
it's too late for you to save me like you had done before.
The bullet wound has pierced my heart
blood will flow the rivers start
I know you've never cried to me before
do you need a hand
do you need a heart
will you need someone to tell you how lucky you are
could I spread my wings
why don't I return
It isn't just me I thought I loved you much more
Your tears are poison
I have to admit
your suffering is starting to make me submit
but as I look upon heavens door
I realise it's too late for me to do more
I want to return
but my heart says go on
I will leave you to find someone better than me
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a song I wrote about my ex
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very nice the bit i liked was do you need a hand
do you need a heart
will you need someone to tell you how lucky you are
could I spread my wings
why don't I return
It isn't just me I thought I loved you much more very cool
is your ex charlotte just wanted to know