yubbies21

Hello! I've never read the book, but have had it on my list for quite a while. I did recognize the spoiler alert. It was very much appreciated. You wrote ...

Okay, SecreteJournalist, wish me luck with this review! It's about 3:30 in the morning here and I just got back from watching "Catching Fire" and then an after-party at a ...

Wow. The ending wasn't exactly what I was expecting. It's so...dark. The beginning seemed so cheery, so lovely, father and daughter touring the armory together. All of a sudden, he ...

I've read and enjoyed your work before, but I have no idea what you are trying to accomplish here. First, you talk about two books, then three and four pages, ...

Hello! It's Yubbies! I understood it in a moment. It all made sense, the dropping subtle clues! I love it, it is amazing. Other people though, who aren't keeping close ...

Hello! This poem caught my eye! In English class, we recently read the short story, "The Enemy". This reminded me of one of the main themes in the story: War ...

Hello! It's yubbies21 here to review this for the Knights of the Green Room Fair Food Fight! This poem is a bit short to get the reader into it, I ...

Love this! I love how you ask a question at the end! It really brings the reader to ask themselves questions! This poem is sadly true for many of us, ...

You used heart twice in a very short amount of time; it made it sound choppy. Maybe tweak this line a bit to say life at the end? Don't cry ...

This here needs to have the plural form revoked and be replaced with a singular form of the word souls. wandering with a lost souls, Other than that little mistake, ...

I love this! It sounds so dramatic at the end, when he/she is walking to find the end of the lake I continued to walk along the lake to find ...

Just a little mistake here, maybe? I don't know if you meant it to be that way: Today I smiled, but I think they [bold]seen[/bold] right through it. Maybe a ...

I love this poem. Somehow, the ending didn't seem to fit quite right. It seems to amateurish to start that statements with the word "and". The statement itself just didn't ...

This is a beautiful poem! I love it with all my heart! It sounds so dark and pleasurable, just lustful, and evil. This is amazing! I love the wonderful description ...

Strangely beautiful! I want to read the book that this will be a part of! I love how it describes the feeling of silence! It's a very musically haunting idea, ...